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Qijuu Sentai Qidenger
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10-08-2020, 04:46 PM
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Androzani84
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I’ve completed the first chapter of my og Super Sentai and I thought I’d share it here, as a bit of thanks to some help I got from submitting the pitch on the “ideas” thread.
For the key, paragraphs in italics are flashbacks, instances of a couple of words in italics within words that aren’t are places where the words would be said in English if this were a real show, the bold segments are the equipment voice (who I haven’t fantasy cast yet) and the bolded italics are narration for next time. Hope you enjoy.
15 Years Ago. The Night of the Crimson Sky.
The whole world was on fire. The skies were glowing a demonic red and the streets, almost devoid of life, were burning. A sole man, middle-aged, stood against his opponent, the demon known as Mairak, and his army of Vordoron Drones. Mairak had an appearance that could best be described as a cross between a blooming rose and a moth, while the Vordorons had a larvae like appearance. “Are you ready to surrender, human?”, Mairak asked his opponent. “This dimension is but mere moments away from falling before the might of my Vordos Empire.”
“You won’t win.”, the man wheezed, holding up a wrist-mounted gadget on his left arm. “Not while I can still fight.”
Mairak laughed. “What can you do? Your comrades lie dead at my feet, your world is in flames and I have taken your power for myself.”
“That power, yes.“, the man said in response, as he held up a coin-shaped item with an engraving of a Wolf on it. “But I can still use another.” He inserted it into the item on his wrist, declaring “Kijuu Henge
!” (Machine-beast Change)
“
Ookami
! (Wolf)
Error
.” The man crackled with energy, as he charged at Mairak, who’s last sight was the man who in one move, had thwarted his path of conquest.
Now.
Hajime Takuto woke up, falling out of bed. “That same dream again.”, he said to himself. “What does it mean? Could it be something to do with the night of the Crimson Sky? Could it be why Father…?”
“Takuto-san.”, his mother called from downstairs. “Mio-kun needs someone to take her to school. I’m too busy and Daiki is meeting with his associates.”
“By ‘associates’, he means ‘criminal friends’.”, Takuto commented. He had always been suspicious of his stepfather, to the point of following him to a meeting with his “associates”, where he had found out the truth. He never said anything since Otonaru Daiki had been a fairly clean person at home, making it hard to find positive proof. “I’ll be down soon, Mother.”, he called back, reaching for some clothes. “Looks like today will be as uninteresting as ever.”
Elsewhere, a large fortress, shaped like a demonic head, emerged from a portal, setting down in a chasm. Inside the fortress, a short robot, wearing an approximation of a scientist’s outfit with a panicked expression permanently formed on his face. “I’ve nearly done it.”, he stated in his squeaky voice. “I’ve managed to create a method of increasing molecular size and weight.
I am a genius.”
“Don’t revel in your little toy just yet, Megaro.” The small robot, Megaro, turned to see the newcomer. This was Calam, an oni-esque creature with armour an his left shoulder and right shin, a scar down his chest and a permanent scowl. “I won’t be convinced of its worth until I’m sure it can work on my guys.”
“Your ‘guys’ aren’t all we should be relying on.” Both turned to the third voice that joined them. It belonged to a female monster, resembling a blue lion, wearing a dress that resembled ice cream in a cone. Her face was permanently in what could be called a smile, for someone with a lion’s face. She also had hair that resembled a punk rock haircut. “After all, remember that we’re all equals within the ranks of Voldos.”
Calam growled again, brandishing his sword, which had jagged edges. “Nobody asked your opinions, Gelashi. And if you’re willing to go for it you Neko, you’ll find yourself as blood on my sword.”
Gelashi tutted, brandishing her claws. “You really think you can beat me, Oni? Well then, let’s see who ends up as blood on who.”
Enough!” All three turned towards the new arrival. A middle-aged humanoid woman, wearing a black dress and crown that resembled a Phoenix. She was accompanied by her servant, a humanoid Wolf bound in chain mail , a burn Mark on its left arm. This was Voldos’ leader Queen Moboroshina and her huntsman Oomikaoo. “I don’t want any of my commanders engaging in needless bickering.”, Moboroshina said, angry at the two. “Either you two work together to ensure our late leader Mairak’s ambitions are met, or I’ll allow Oomikaoo to make you his prey.”
“I’m sorry, Lady Moboroshina.”, Gelashi said as she changed her tune, bowing her head. “I won’t cause arguments again.”
Calam on the other hand was less quick to give up his anger. “Why should I even listen to you? You claim to continue Lord Mairak’s will, but I know you can’t possibly come from the Vordos Dimension. We don’t have creatures like you.”
“I’ll point out that none of us bar you and your pets are from that dimension.”, Gelashi said in response. “Speaking of which, what better to use as a test subject for the new device?”
“Indeed.”, Moboroshina nodded. “Calam. If you want to prove your worth, then you should send out one of your Vorjuu to the human world.”
Calam growled. “Well, since you suggested it.
Come on
, VolKraken!” He slammed his sword into the ground. A reptilian monster, sporting long arms and a long neck, emerged from the darkness, snarling. “VolKraken, you will go down to the planet and begin the dimension destruction plan.
Go
.” The beast growled and turned away, walking off.
Down on Earth, Takuto was escorting his sister, Otonaru Mio to her high school. She was technically the daughter of his father, Hajime Tatsuhisa, but because his mother had married Daiki to provide her second child with a father, she had legally taken his name. “Hey big brother, what’s got you so down?”, Mio asked. “Did you have that dream again?”
“Not just that.”, was Takuto’s answer. “I keep getting this feeling. Like something terrible is about to…” He suddenly stopped, feeling a strange wind blowing. “I’m sorry.”, he said to Mio as he turned and set off running in a different direction.
“Eh? Big brother, wait!”, Mio called out as she ran after him.
Across town, VolKraken was causing destruction, aided by a group of Vordorons. It was firing beams from its mouth to destroy buildings, blow up cars and create holes in the pavement. It was at that moment two passers-by, a young man in a yellow jacket and a young woman, stopped to fight the two. “Hey you, stop right there.”, the woman declared as she pointed at the Vorjuu, grabbing its attention. “Your rampage won’t be allowed to continue.”
“Agreed.”, the man nodded. “This ends here.”
Before either of them could do anything, Takuto came running to the scene, proceeding to beat up VolKraken, who managed to defend itself expertly. “Hey, Vorjuu, I’m not going to let your rampage continue.” He then paused, realising what he had just said. “How did I know what that thing was?”, he asked himself.
From the side, a mysterious onlooker observed this. “It’s him. Could he be?”
Mio then came running up, out of breath from the long distance. “Brother, you shouldn’t just go running off like that. What would mother…” she paused, getting a good look at VolKraken and it’s retinue “think?”
VolKraken motioned for its retinue of Vordorons to attack the four humans. Takuto, Mio and the other two made quick work of the grunts using basic hand-to-hand, but then they faced VolKraken itself. Though they tried their best, none of the 4 could match the beast in combat, being quickly overwhelmed. Having knocked it’s enemies back, VolKraken opened a portal and jumped into it, making its getaway. “What was that thing?”, the woman asked.
“This guy called it a ‘Vorjuu’.”, the man said, indicating Takuto. “But I want to know how he knew that.”
Takuto picked himself up. “If I’m honest, I don’t know. It just slipped out.”
“I think I know someone who can explain.” The man in the shadows said, stepping out to reveal himself. “You’ll have to come with me.”
Mio was in shock at the newcomer. “Kamijo-san.”, she commented.
Takuto on the other hand was more apprehensive. “You! What are you doing here?”
“Right now, I’m trying to help avert a great threat to the world as we know it.”, the man known as Kamijo answered him. “For now, I ask that you put aside any feelings you have for me, Hajime-san, and accompany me. That includes you three as well.”
Back at the Voldos Fortress, the three Commanders we’re discussing the recent fight with their Queen. “Why did VolKraken retreat?”, Moboroshina asked. “He had those youths on the ropes.”
“An unfortunate part of the intense training I put the beast through to secure its allegiance.”, Calam said in response. “It believes that in order to fight effectively, it requires help, no matter how strong it is compared to its opponents.”
“Then perhaps we should send something stronger than mere Vordorons.”, Gelashi suggested. “Perhaps I should accompany VolKraken-chan in its next attack.”
“Not on your own.”, Moboroshina insisted. “I’m going to lend you the use of Oomikaoo. He is viciously dedicated and will not fall until all of his opponents are dead.”
“The Queen is most gracious.”, Gelashi bowed. “So,
shall we go
?”
Back with VolKraken’s opponents, they had been taken to a mansion and made to sit in the living room, while the man known as Kamijo had left to do his own thing. “So, since we’re stuck waiting here, we might as well the discuss a few things.”, the other man said. “First off, who is the guy that brought us here? You two seem to know him.”
“He’s Kamijo Ryosuke, an associate of my father.”, Mio answered. “Stepfather really. I never knew my real father, since he disappeared soon after I was conceived. Only my brother knew him and his memory isn’t that good.”
“Kamijo’s also a criminal.”, Takuto stated, much to Mio’s shock. “He and Otonaru Daiki’s other associates meet to plan things such as robberies, extortion, murders and other illicit activities. I know they’re guilty, but I have nothing on them besides having seen one of their meetings.” Mio was shocked to hear about this side of her stepfather she had known nothing about. “Anyway, since we’re discussing names, we might as well learn each others’. I’m Hajime Takuto and this is my sister Otonaru Mio.”
“Wataru. Shinohara Wataru.”, the other man introduced himself. “I’m a student at Science Academia, currently on a break to work on a project. I guess I’ll have to apply for a longer break, depending on what happens to us.”
The other woman introduced herself next. “I’m Komaki Hibiki. I’m an assistant music teacher at an elementary school. I’m sorry to hear about your missing father, Takuto-san, Mio-chan. My own mother’s been gone for a long time. I ended up growing up in a children’s home.”
It was at this point that Kamijo Ryosuke re-entered the room, accompanied by an older man. “Nice to see you’ve all made your introductions.”, he said. “But now, I’d like you to meet our benefactor.”
“Oh, so you think we’re going to just help you with whatever criminal pursuit you’ve cooked up, Kamijo-san?”, Takuto said angrily. “Not likely. And who is this anyway?”
“I prefer to keep my identity out of this matter,
Mr. Hajime
.”, was the old man’s response. “But I can assure you, my intentions are well within your laws.”
“And what are these intentions?”, Hibiki asked. “What could you possibly want the 4 of us for, in addition to Kamijo-san?”
“I need your help to save the world.”, the old man answered, going over to a bookcase, pulling one of the books, this caused a portrait on the walls, depicting the Shinto gods Izanagi and Izana, to retract, revealing a compartment with five cellphone-like devices, which had 5 cards next to them.
“Cellphones?”, Mio said as she picked one of them up and began examining it. “Has Oji-san been out in years? Cellphones are set of… outdated.”
“They are not mere cellphones.”, the old man snapped. “Perhaps one of you would care to pick up one of these cards?”
Wataru shrugged. “Might as well.”, he said as he picked up one of the cards. “After all, being a scientist is about taking risks.” The card in his hand glowed, before manifesting a yellow silhouette on it. “How curious.” He picked up on of the cellphone devices, finding a slot, into which he inserted the card.
“
Yellow, recognition confirmed
.” The cellphone announced.
“These are the JuuKeitai (Beast Cellphone), a set of henshin items I created to harness the powers of animals within the human body. They work by equipping a
powered suit
that fuses the power of an animal within these Soul Chips.” The old man held up a coin shaped item, featuring an engraving of a lion. “Each of these Soul Chips features the
life energy
of a creature that exists. The suits can harness the power, but be warned. If you try to transform with a Soul Chip that has a less than 49.9% fusion compatibility, the essence of the contained animal will overwhelm your body and mind, making you a beast.”
“I assume you intend for the 5 of us, Kamijo-san included, to take these up and what? Fight the invaders?”, Takuto asked.
“Exactly.”, Kamijo nodded. “I hope you can put aside your animosity to me to help save the day, Hajime-kun.”
Takuto fumed at this casual addressing, but before he could act on this, he felt that same wind again. “They’re here again.”, he said, taking one JuuKeitai and one of the ID cards, creating a red silhouette on it, before running out.
“Well, we’d better follow him, if he really knows the way.”, Wataru stated. The others all fist-pumped and nodded, picking up the gear and setting out.
In the city, VolKraken was attacking once more, assisted by Oomikaoo and Gelashi. Several people were running, looking for cover. “Yes, tremble human filth.”, Gelashi declared, laughing like a noblewoman. “Your pitiful dimension will soon be gone from existence.”
“Stop it.” The attack party turned to see Takuto running towards them. “Vordos, your rampage will end here.”, he blurted out. Oomikaoo observed the newcomer, getting a flash of recognition before shaking it off.
“Ah, the human youth that was beaten by VolKraken-chan before. You really think you can make a difference by yourself.” Gelashi commented, before laughing once more.
“He’s not by himself.” Gelashi turned to see the other 4 appearing. “So, you’re the ones behind that monster.”, Wataru noted.
“Indeed. We are the Dimension Destruction Army Vordos. And I am Gelashi, one of the Three Demon Generals that continue the will of Lord Mairak, who perished on the Night of the Crimson Sky, 15 of your years ago.”
“‘Crimson Sky’? ‘15 years ago’?”, Hibiki pondered, having a flashback to the last time she had seen her mother.
“Don’t worry, Hibiki-chan. Mother will make sure the red skies go away. You need to do your best to be brave. I’ll be back soon.” The young Hibiki then saw her mother go out the door, never to be seen again.
Back in the present, Takuto pointed at Gelashi, Oomikaoo and VolKraken. “Like I said, your rampage will end here, at our hands.” He pulled out the JuuKeitai and his ID card, with the others doing likewise. “Everyone, let’s go.”
“Kijuu Henge!” A Soul Chip appeared to each of them, which they all took and inserted into their JuuKeitai.
“
Shishi! Kame! Taka! Kajiki! Jaguar! Doubutsu Gashin!
(Animal Fusion)” As the JuuKeitai rang out, the powered suits were generated onto the 5, with Takuto gaining a red suit, Kamijo gaining a black suit, Hibiki a pink suit, Mio a blue suit and Wataru a yellow suit. They then gained animal-themed details on their suits. Red gained lion details, Black received turtle details, with a honeycomb pattern on his arms, Pink had her suit altered with hawk-esque elements, Blue received a blade-shape on her helmet, similar to a swordfish and Yellow had gained the features of a jaguar on his helmet. The 5 all shared a stylised “Q” with teeth engraved on it. The 5 then stepped forward in order, giving their names and doing a pose.
“QidenRed!”
“QidenBlack!”
“QidenPink!”
“QidenBlue!”
“QidenYellow!”
Then the 5 said in unison “Kijuu Sentai Qidenger!”
As the three invaders looked on in shock, a single word came out of Oomikaoo’s mouth. “Qidenger.”
Gelashi on the other hand was not deterred. “VolKraken,
attack
!”
The three villains charged into battle, engaging the newly formed Qidengers. Takuto/QidenRed went straight for VolKraken hitting it with a series of punches that caused the beast to stagger backwards. “If only I had a weapon.”, he stated. As if on cue, a sword appeared in his hand.
Kijuu Caliber.
“Nice.”, Takuto said as he began swinging his new weapon at VolKraken, severing part of its arm.
Elsewhere, Kamijo/QidenBlack and Mio/QidenBlue were fighting with Oomikaoo. “So, you seem to be higher up in the organisation then your mindless helper.”, Black commented, summoning up his weapon.
Kijuu Caliber.
Blue had also deployed hers, delivering several slashes to Oomikaoo. “Tell your leaders that we”re not going to let you do what you want. And that’s a message from the Qidenger.”
Hibiki/QidenPink and Wataru/QidenYellow had engaged Gelashi. “You cursed humans.”, the lion-woman growled. “You won’t succeed in saving your dimension.”
“Don’t be too sure.”, Yellow said in response. “You shouldn’t underestimate the future of scientific process.” He tried to mimic the pose to summon the Kijuu Caliber, as did Pink.
But instead, a gun each appeared in their hands. “
Kijuu Magnum
.”
“Well, never look a gift horse in the mouth, to borrow a phrase.”, Pink commented as she pointed her new weapon at the enemy, firing and knocking Gelashi back. Then a slot opened in the back of the weapon. “What's this for?”
“I assume it’s something that uses these.”, Yellow answered as he pulled out his Soul Chip, inserting it into his Kijuu Magnum. Hibiki took out her own and followed his lead
Qiden Charge! Jaguar!/Taka!
“Qiden
Powered Shot
!” Wataru and Hibiki stated, firing their weapons at Gelashi, knocking her back in an explosion.
“You won this round, Qidenger.”, Gelashi said angrily. “But next time will be different.” She then disappeared in a puff of smoke.
Across the field, Kamijo and Mio had got the better of Oomikaoo and opened and inserted their Soul Chip into the slot on their Kijuu Caliber, preparing their own attack. “Qiden
Powered Slash!
”
Qiden Charge! Kame!/Kajiki!
The two blades hit Oomikaoo, with him emerging from the blast covered in smoke. He growled at the two before teleporting out.
Takuto managed to knock VolKraken into some barrels, before pulling out a Kijuu Magnum and firing shots at the creature with it. “Let’s see if these can be used together.”, he said, pressing the two weapons together, causing the sword to rest on the top barrel of the gun, forming a rifle
Kijuu Buster
. Takuto inserted his Soul Chip into the weapon.
Qiden Full Charge!
“Qiden
Super Final!
”, Takuto stated as he fired the weapon at VolKraken, causing a larger burst of energy to come forth.
Spark
! The energy hit VolKraken, causing him to explode into pieces.
At the Voldos Fortress, the two commanders came stumbling in. “I’m sorry, Lady Moboroshina.”, Gelashi wheezed. “These humans were tougher than we expected.”
“Qidenger.”, Oomikaoo managed to say.
Moboroshina was shocked. “Oomikaoo, you can speak once more?”
“That’s what you focus on, Moboroshina?”, Calam asked. “How can the Qidengers have thwarted us. Lord Mairak killed them all himself during the Night of the Crimson Sky. I saw it.”
“You fool.”, Moboroshina scowled at him. “Clearly this is a new group that have inherited the same power.” She then turned to Megaro. “Can you use the machine now?”
“Of course I can, Lady Moboroshina.”, Megaro nodded nervously, before pressing a series of buttons on his keypad. A red beam of energy came out of the “eye” of the fortress and headed towards the battlefield.
“
Good job
, everyone.”, Takuto said to the others as they were celebrating. “We managed to defeat them for now.”
As if on cue, the red beam hit the smouldering remains of VolKraken, causing a giant copy to emerge from the remains. “No way.”, Mio said with shock. “How are we meant to fight this thing now?”
Takuto then received a call on his JuuKeitai from the old man. “You can use the JuuKeitai to summon a great beast to fight against giant creatures like this. Simply enter the code ‘5466’ in your JuuKeitai after selecting the animal icon.”
“
Thank you
, Oji-san.”, Takuto said into the phone, before pressing the button and inserting the code.
Summon
Kijuu Lion
. A large robot, resembling a lion appeared and lunged at VolKraken, knocking the beast back. Takuto then leapt up into the robot, taking control of it.
“Kijuu Lion, Bujin Henkei!” At Takuto’s command, the lion’s head folded forward, with the neck section breaking in half and becoming a set of shoulders, with the front legs transforming into arms, the feet becoming clawed hands. The hind legs folded upwards, becoming a pair of regular legs. Finally, a humanoid head emerged from the area where the lion head had been. “Now, let’s go.” Kijuu Lion engaged in hand to hand with VolKraken, slashing at the creature with its claws and blocking the hits aimed at itself. “Tsume no Mai!”(dance of the claws) The robot began spinning at high speed, hitting VolKraken with its claws several times, causing it to fall down and explode.
The 4 on the ground celebrated this. “Nice one, Hajime-san.”, Kamijo called out.
Back in the Vordos Fortress, Moboroshina entered her private room, approaching a mirror. “Kagami-san, I request your presence, now.”
The mirror covered her reflection in smoke, from which a different face, with glowing red eyes manifested. “I’m aware of your problems, Moboroshina.”, the being known as Kagami said. “I sensed that he is active again. Presumably a new generation of Qidengers has awakened.”
“Indeed, Kagami-san.”, Moboroshina nodded. “But there’s more. Oomikaoo has recovered his ability to speak. The first stage of our agreement has been completed.”
The phantom image of Kagami nodded. “Continue to fulfil my task for you and I will complete the process. That is our deal.”
Back at the old man’s mansion, the inhabitant switched off a new report featuring one Kousuke Ryuota, as the 5 new Qidengers came in. “Oji-san, good news. We managed to defeat that thing.”, Takuto called out.
The old man laughed at this. “You speak as if it were a great victory.” His tone suddenly turned angry. “You fool. You still have much to learn, young Takuto.”
In order to ensure Hajime Takuto changes, the old man assigns him to spend time with Shinohara Wataru. Then the pair meet Voldos’ first Bukikai (weapon machine) BukiOleander, which releases a terrible poison into the city. Wataru and Takuto have to ensure the populace lives through the crisis. Next time: Inspiration! The Genius Battle. Look forward to it.
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