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Kamen Rider: Ultimate Xtreme - Fanfic
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guncannon109
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AUTHOR'S NOTE:
Hey all, guncannon109 here. I know it’s been awhile since I’ve touched the world of Xtreme and I believe you all deserve an explanation. Life happened and I began to feel as though I should just drop this fic all together as I am a much different person now from when I first started it. That was what I honestly believed and I carelessly left it in the dirt to pursue other projects. However you never fall out of love with your first creation and Xtreme was and always will be mine, so leaving it in it’s unfinished state just felt wrong to me, the series and most importantly all you readers. So here’s the deal, we are going to refocus. Since I know it’s been awhile, A LONG WHILE, I will offer two options. You can either A go back and re-read the first four acts OR if your new to this series or just want to refresh yourself, you can back and re-read the trials and adventures of Alex and company in full. Regardless of which one you choose, I will be providing a summary of all four acts along with the Magika Crossover and Xtreme’s summer special along with an in retrospect 20/20 Thought post at the end of each summary for each segment of this beast of a project. I hope you all enjoy the ride.
Kamen Rider Xtreme - Act Five: End Game is about to start!
Act 1: Dopant Hunter
Alex is gifted a locked case containing the X Driver and six gaia memories by Police Chief Gordon Sampson and Officer Johnathan Marcoh requested by his mother Alice in her will. After an encounter with the Spite Dopant, Alex dawns the X Driver and becomes Kamen Rider Xtreme. Spite as a member of an organization known as META sets their sights on Alex.
Spite, as ordered by her commander Vainglory sends her cat Cheshire as the Gorge Dopant to reclaim the X Driver. Suspicions rise from Sampson and Alex's best friend Cole as the rider begins acting strange. Alex is hospitalized as a result of an encounter with Gorge, Sampson questioning him after finding the gaia memories in his possession. Upon determining his innocence, Sampson tells Alex everything and once the Gorge dopant is dealt with Alex is appointed as an agent of the law.
As a result of Spite's failure, Vainglory turns to his second in command Fury who enlist his own agent Fury to deal with the Kamen Rider. Alex is momentarily defeated by Flame after Sarah Gardner becomes caught up in the fray, Alex being able to take down Flame after a change in strategy, earning the respect of Flame in the process. Alex is given both the X Cyclone motorbike and the title of Kamen Rider by Sampson.
After the Flame ordeal, Alex and Cole are invited by Madison Tyler to a day at the waterpark after Ashley Haze finds herself with a surplus of tickets. Sarah Gardner is not pleased with Alex's presence but gets over it quick. The water park is attacked by the water controlling Shift Dopant, who had also stolen a valuable necklace (the Eye of Luna) along with many other priceless pieces of artwork before hand. Shift gets away momentarily but it's quickly uncovered that Ashley herself is the one behind it all, needing the money to support her father. Shift is defeated and Ashley arrested with Marcoh informing Alex that with hope, she'll get out early on good behavior.
Things simmer down until Greg Walker, the man who killed Alex's mother, is released from prison. Alex is warned from both Marcoh and Sampson to not pursue him but does so anyway, learning that Greg is the powerful Shredder Dopant. After Alex survives the encounter, he runs into Tara Archer who gives him a pep talk while Cole, Madison and Sarah learn the truth of who Alex is. Madison falling head over heels for him as a result. With reassurance from his friends, Alex charges off to confront the Shredder and is able to defeat him with the help of Marcoh, Sampson and the rest of the police force.
20/20 Thoughts
Honestly I was fairly impressed with how well Act One held up in my eyes. Now obviously the quality of it is a mess since I didn’t edit squat back when I wrote it, but it was fun to write and the low stacks of it makes it fun to go back to. Are there things I would change? Hell yeah, but as it is I’m happy with it.
Movie Taisen Zeta
In france, a Wizard based Kamen Rider named Magika mourns over the Ringed Wizard Haruto Souma forgetting her. She is greeted by a local boy named Pierre who is quickly taken by her, the boy turning out to be a gate right under her nose. That night, she has nightmares of her inner phantom Pegasus being attacked by a phantom named Voodoo and four others based on Magika’s elemental styles. The five phantoms break off from her. Magika hunts them down one by one before finally coming face to face with Voodoo himself. The battle is brutal and Voodoo manages to take Magika’s life, only for her to be revived by Pierre pushing through his despair and becoming a wizard himself. Voodoo is about to gear up for another fight but senses a strong power elsewhere and chases after it.
Meanwhile back in Ardent City, a powerful dopant uses the images of Flame, Shift and Shredder to go after Alex. Alex’s only salvation coming from the return of Joel Revant, the Inertia Dopant and former leader of META. The two talk and with Inertia’s help Alex is able to defeat the dopant behind it all, revealing himself to be the Illusion Dopant. The chaos appears to be over, however the one in possession of the Illusion Memory is none other than the Voodoo Phantom and after cravely injuring Alex he escapes through a portal baiting Alex to follow.
Alex leaps through the portal and finds himself atop Ardent Secondary School, Voodoo cackling as Magika arrives to fight the phantom. Magika uses her magic to heal Alex and translate everything he says to negate the language barrier between them, Voodoo transporting them to a rock quarry for their final fight. Voodoo consumes the Illusion memory and ascends into a violet warlock form and unleashes zombified forms of Flame, Shift and Shredder along with the defeated Phantoms. Working together, Alex and Magika defeat the zombie minions and reach Voodoo. Pierre teleports in to help as the newly awakened Kamen Rider Sorcerer, giving Magika and Alex a pair of rings that grant Magika her final form (Showtime) and grants Alex the ability to use his Star Runner, Blade Kicker and Blast Diver forms at the same time. Voodoo is defeated, Pierre proposes to Magika, an image of Alice appears before Alex and a yellow wind based rider appears to watch over the fight with a smirk eager to get involved.
20/20 Thoughts
Zeta was fun to work on as a collab with Tokunation user KamenRiderOOO but honestly I feel like I phoned my segment in a little. OOO stole the show with Magika with moments that had me on the edge of my seat and that final confrontation with Voodoo made my heart drop like you wouldn’t believe. Seriously, give OOO the praise he deserves. He also does custom figures if that’s suits your fancy. He’s an awesome guy so spam his inbox and tell him old Gunny sent you.
Act 2 Wind and Earth
Word spreads of a pair of bear like dopants, Major and Minor, who attack female singers with beautiful voices as Jeane Evonna comes to the station to ask for protection for his daughter Thea who has a performance that night. Alex is placed on guard duty but as the dopant twins attack the stage, Thea Evonna is revealed to be Tara Archer, and with her yellow bird partner Kree becomes Kamen Rider Gale. Alex and Tara but heads, Madison confiding in Tara about her anxiety about asking out Alex by informing her she's never even kissed anyone. Tara solves this by stealing Madison's first kiss, Madison too flustered to let anyone know. Alex and Tara join forces and take on the twin Dopants. Minor losing his life in defense of his sister with Major being arrested after grief and anger overwhelm her. After Zix is arrested, Madison confesses her feelings to Alex and the two start dating.
Fury, after witnessing his many pawns fail and fearing Vainglory catching wind of his plans to overthrow him, attacks the riders head on and captures Alex, Kree and Madison. Joel Revant, aka the Inertia Dopant, reappears and gifts Tara the Rock Driver and it sparks a rescue effort from her, Sarah and Cole. Sarah attempts to use the Rock Driver but her unstable emotions result in it failing to bond with her, and a direct brutal attack from Fury leads Sarah to pass it onto Cole. Cole becomes Kamen Rider Rock and Fury is pushed into a retreat as Alex, Tara and Cole stand as one.
The damage from Fury was dealt however as the hospitalized Sarah learns she is paralyzed from the waist down and may never walk again. That is however until Fury comes to her with a way out in the form of the Reptilian gaia memory, offering to plant it inside her and restore her legs. This is a deal that Sarah accepts. As the memory grows within Sarah, Fury attacks in his upgrades Ruthless form which holds the power of previously defeated dopants. Fortune is not on the rider's side however, after Sarah confesses her feelings towards Madison, the memory inside her goes berserk and consumes her. Fury determines he has done enough damage and retreats as he figures Reptilian will take care of the riders for him. That is when the one thing no one expects occurs and Madison jumps into the fray, becoming impaled by Reptilian’s tail which allows Sarah to come back to her senses. Within Sarah's moment of clarity, she asks Alex to end things to which he regretfully agrees. As Sarah crumbles to dust and scatters to the wind, Inertia appears and offers a way to save Madison but at a cost of her memory of the past three years. Alex accepts and upon realizing his failure, casts aside the title of Kamen Rider.
20/20 Thoughts
So where do I begin with this… Personally, I could have done this a lot better. Madison could’ve had a bigger spine when she was captured by Fury and I am still to this day kicking myself for falling ass backwards into the bury your gays trope. Plus, while I fully stand by the quality of An Untimely Farewell on its own, it is a gut puncher that I kinda feel broke the series in a way I wasn’t prepared to deal with. If I were to rewrite this, I would rethink dumping two of my best and most well liked characters at the same time for the sake of drama and shock value. To make a long story short, I felt this act was great as I was writing it but my god it hurts the most in retrospect. Certainly something I would reconsider if I had to do it over again.
Act 3: Ice and Fire
Cole and Tara continue fighting dopants as Alex deludes himself with his new normal. A new student, Shiore Fubuki, quickly puts together that Cole and Tara are Rock and Gale and falsely concludes the identity of Alex. Isolating Alex from his friends via occupying them with ice clone attacks elsewhere in the city, Shiore ambushes Alex and revealing herself as Kamen Rider Yuki declares her intent to kill him. Cole intervenes and Shiore leaves in a huff, the gaia memories that Tara forced into Alex's bag proving her deduction wrong. Cole smacks Alex around for being a sulk, Ashley returning to give Alex a pep talk after Cole leaves in a fit of anger in pursuit of Shiore. Fury corners Shiore and attempts to recruit her, she refusing resulting in Fury going on the attack. Tara and Cole rush to her aid, Tara sending Kree to fetch Alex who rushes over with a new resolve and a promise to never fail in protecting anyone again. One Fury is sent running by the four riders, Shiore explains that the three riders Rock, Gale and Yuki once belonged to three great clans Iwa, Kazumaki, and Shirayuki and that a fourth clan, Kazai exists and its rider has been given a new form. Ryu-O, the rider of fire, and that she aims to end him for destroying what remained of the Shirayuki clan. Time was on their side however as Rylee Damon, Carter Damon successfully finishes the activation test for the Ryu-O driver, Vainglory tasking Fury to duel him as a test with a corrosive spike being injected into his arm as motivation. The duel between Fury and Ryu-O breaks into the city, catching the attention of Shiore with the help of her Gaia Memory Radiation (GMR) Scanner. Alex, Cole, Tara and Shiore join forces and travel to the fight with motivation to take out both Fury and Ryu-O, Tara confiding in Cole that she has memory gaps as a result of a freak hurricane that engulfed the city seven years ago. The riders arrive to the sight of Ryu-O hacking off Fury's corroded arm before burning him alive with the flame emitters in the palms of his hands. Shiore goes berserk and recklessly attacks, Ryu-O overpowering her due to his more stable emotional state. The other riders use their combined strength to fend off Ryu-O and break his transformation which knocks him out cold. This earns the respect and gratitude of Shiore who vows to help them so long as they in turn help her. Tara meanwhile is on edge while Carter is brought in for questioning as she seems to recognize his face from somewhere. Carter is brought into the station for questioning but Marcoh and Sampson do not get far as Vainglory attacks from the shadows to retrieve Carter and the Ryu-O driver. Interia arrives at META HQ, Vainglory and Spite taking him in.
With the station being repaired and no leads being found, the riders are asked by Sampson and Marcoh to take some time to breath, Tara roping Shiore and Cole to with her to her father's cafe the Cat's Eye while Alex does some research on a recurring dream he's been having about five riders and the end of the world. A mysterious man named Tsukasa arrives in Ardent City while another man named Kaito steals a valuable case from Marcoh and Sampson that was left to them by Alice. Tsukasa meets Alex in the library and informs him he is a rider himself named Decade, the two having a discussion while getting some air as the Glitch Dopant Attacks. Elsewhere, Tara is heartbroken to see that he father's cafe location had been moved with Hikari Studio's in its place. After some violent words from Tara the trio is invited in for coffee, which is interrupted by a call to action from Marcoh. The four riders and Decade corner the Glitch Dopant just as he fries the X Driver, with Carter arriving to take him offline as a result of his failure to stick to orders. Carter arriving sparks conflict among the riders which results in Tsukasa deeming them unworthy of being Kamen Riders at all. He declares war on Carter, Cole, Tara and Shiore, a conflict so devastating that it resets the world. Alex as a result wakes to a world with no riders, Cole and Tara not knowing anything, Sarah being alive, Carter being the older brother of Tara and Shiore nowhere is sight. After a freak out in class upon realizing what exactly is happening, Sarah lends him her aid by locating Shiore for, noting that she's a transfer student at an elite prep school. Alex bolts to find her, explaining that he knows about the four clans which thankfully is still something that exists in this timeline. Cole, Carter and Tara naturally cluster together due to Alex's influence with Kaito finding them and bringing them to Alex. Decade launches another attack on Alex and Shiore but it is thwarted by Natsumi and Yuusuke, Kaito making it to Alex's side with Tara, Cole and Carter just in time. Decade challenges Alex to one final fight, dispatching clones of the eight heisei riders that came before him to occupy the others as Cole, Tara, Carter and Shiore regain their powers. The four elemental riders fighting side by side sparks a reaction from the case Kaito stole, its contents breaking free in the form of the Xtreme Memory. It sores to Alex and connects to the X Driver, fixing it and the world sending Alex to and Tsukasa to a white void where Alice Darwin is waiting for them. She asks them what they wish to do, and they both tell her they will fight to protect what they believe in. Alice smiles and wishes them luck, telling Alice she loves him and giving him the name Xtreme before sending them back to the original timeline before Glitch broke the X Driver. Alex, Cole, Tara, Shiore, Carter, Tsukasa, Kaito, Natsumi and Yuusuke confront the glitch Dopant together, Alex achieving his final form which gives the riders the power they need to finally defeat him. Victorious, Tsukasa's group departs, but not before telling Alex. "That Driver... I have seen only one other like it. It is owned by a strong rider, and one I respect. I hope that in time you can become just as strong as them."
20/20 Thoughts
Definitely my most ambitious act and one I am still proud of to this day, lack of editing notwithstanding. Thinking back to the events I still look back fondling to a lot of it. If I were to change anything I would trim a few things down or just format everything better and.. You know, maybe not rip several key scenes right from the Disappearance of Haruhi Suzumiya? Honestly, I’m shocked I did that and even more shocked more people didn’t call me out on it.
I’m gonna let you all in on a dirty secret, this was the act that I wanted to get rid of Sarah and Madison for to write as it was all planned out before I wrote the first chapter and… well Sarah and Madison weren’t involved, in fact they weren’t even in the series bible at all and they just came into existence while I was writing everything. Yeah you could argue that their lose was useful in putting Alex in a depressed funk and lead to a lot of really good scenes but I should have greatly reconsidered whether or not it was the right decision to stick to my guns or consider an alternate path that didn’t involve something so brutal and super cliche. Either way though, the Decade arc was a key storyline I had built the series around and I am so very glad it was as well received as it was. You guys rock, really you do.
Xtreme Special - Summer Wars
Fury’s brother Anton Maverick is freed from prison by a mysterious woman, receiving a driver from her along with the Vulpergiest memory. Alex and the other riders spent a summer afternoon at the city waterpark, running into Madison who does not remember him. They chat but soon go their separate ways just as a water based Kamen Rider attacks Tara and Shiore from the water named Lurentia. Alex and Cole are about to jump in when the electric rider Gamma-Ray catches them by surprise.The quarrel is only stopped by the arrival of Kamen Rider Fata, to which Alex is stunned speechless believing he had seen a ghost. Meanwhile, a couple kamen rider duo of wood and steel named Corodoron and Slicer attack Carter while he’s shopping but manages to fend them off. The riders all cluster together, Vulpergiest making his grand entrance as the fake Fata betrays the riders, swiping the Xtreme Memory from Alex. Vulpergiest declares war upon our heroes before unleashing an attack so devastating that it traps them underground.
Alex and Shiore take on Gamma-Ray, Shiore activating her Shira form with Alex taking her yuki memory to dawn the temp combo Star Yuki which allows them to take down the electric whip master. Tara and Cole find themselves trapped with Slicer and Corodoron, Cole and Tara finding the strength to overcome them. The riders make their way to the surface, Carter facing off against Laurentia in a sudden death duel as Marcoh and Sampson block off Ardent Tower which the evil riders have taken as a command point. Alex and Shiore charge through the blockade, Vulpergiest attaching the Xtreme Memory to his spear and begins unleashing a wave of nightmare energy upon the city.
Gamma-ray blocks Alex and Shiore’s ascent, but the electric rider is intercepted by the debut of Kamen Rider Jayd who offers to deal with Gamma-Ray herself as a favor between riders. Alex and Shiore combine to form Kamen Rider Zoltan to defeat Vulpergiest before he lays waste to the city with Madison cheering them from the side lines, having bolted there from her parents’ car after seeing the battle from afar. Vulpergiest is defeated and peace to the city restored. The fake Fata escapes and casts her gaia memory and driver aside to reveal the Desire dopant memory, changing into a succubus, informing an orange ring on her finger there is more to come.
Note: This marked the first appearance of Kamen Rider Jayd, now Dungeon Crawler Jayd. None Kamen Rider based reboot is currently in the works.
20/20 Thoughts
I’ll be honest, I had fun designing the evil riders but I found myself getting bored with this special rather quickly. All in all I felt that I needed to have solely to have it and I’m pretty sure it shows. It wasn’t all bad though, some scenes were fun and interesting write like Alex meeting Madison at the waterpark they had first met at and showcasing Jayd for the first time ever was a blast.
Even so, I think it shows that this wasn’t something I put my A Game into. I just kinda wanted it to be finished and done with… Oh and I ripped off the birth of Omnimon in this dammit! Thankfully I was called out on that one, but still that is unacceptable. I am a professional I swear.
Oh! And the guy who got stuck to Alex’s bike was the main character from Kamen Rider Exor, also from KamenRiderOOO but I completely forgot to make that credit. Again, super professional.
Xtreme Act 4: Bonds
A new semester begins, Alex meeting Sarah's older brother Vince at her Crave after school to find that his father has returned after so many years. Alex is pissed but after prodding from everyone decides that giving Jason a chance might actually be a good idea. This turns out to be the wrong choice as, after an attack by the dopant named Crave and his rouge faction Genesis, Jason reveals himself to be Vainglory. Madison meets a musician named Larc Pearlman with unknown ties to Genesis and the two start dating. Ashley checks up on her while extending a hand to Alex as a sign that she has changed for the better. As Carter attempts to mend bridges between him and Shiore, as well as make up for lost time with Tara, Ms Seraphina takes up shop as a teacher at West Ardent Secondary School. It is soon revealed to the audience but not to the riders that she is the Desire Dopant, a partner of Crave who turns out to be Vince Gardner and Rylee's cat Cheshire is shown to have been Kat Swindler, an agent of the Desire Dopant.
A few filler chapters build tension such as Time-Bomb, which after strapping a bomb to Carter and a young girl named Becky gives him the Phoenix memory and he upgrades to his final form Phoenix Ryu-O with the help of the dragon spirit of fire Ryujin. Its after a battle with time-bomb alongside Carter that Alex learns he can only use the Xtreme memory when all five riders are working toward the same goal.
Carter offers to take the other riders to META HQ but is shock when he finds his normal way in has been destroyed. The cyber dopant then locks Carter and Shiore in a d&d style pocket dimension where they are forced to work together. Alex, Tara and Cole try fight off Cyber in the real world to release their allies. Shiore learns to trust Carter and the two break out, Cyber being defeated by the riders with Cole obtaining the Biter memory from one of Cyber's minions. Tara's memories are returned to her suddenly, knocking her out due to the shock. Before the riders can take in Cyber for questioning, META introducing into combat their X2 Troopers, soldiers using copies of Xtremes Star, Blade and Blast memories. They thank Carter for his help before informing him he is being discharge due to treason. Carter protests, and the other riders help him in fighting them when the troopers open fire on him.
The inverse dopant turns Alex into a girl, Cole helping Tara and Carter reconcile as Cole gives Carter a place to stay in his family's building. Ashley investigates the past dopants with Marcoh, leading her to Zix Crator the Major Dopant for answers. She regains the Shift memory and dangles the Major memory in front of Zix, hoping to get something out of her. Ashley's attempts fail and after the Inverse Dopant is defeated, Zix steals her memory back and breaks from prison swearing to take revenge on the riders.
20/20 Thoughts
Act Four is a mess, plain and simple. Various personal issues kept me from keeping focus and I kept throwing various ideas at the board to see what stuck and very little of it actually did. If I were to go back, I would liven up the tone a lot, simplifying the plot alot and drop the Inverse Arc entirely or just have it so Alex goes back to normal at the end. Either way, I would make sure to stick to my original and have the act end with Major’s Revenge instead of just having it lead into it. All in all, Act Four is just a whole lot of waffling around without much forward progression happening. Arcs like the introduction and Time-Bomb are really good and still hold up, but Cyber could have been done so much better and Inverse needed to be more fun if I was going to keep it at all. Looking back, it’s just a mismanaged mess that almost made me lose interest in this series all together until I worked out how to salvage it.
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