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06-20-2015, 06:53 AM | #1 |
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Pretty sure somebody had this idea before since it's common but I haven't seen anything written for it and I'm pretty sure I can give it a fresh feeling. I basically need somebody to bounce ideas off of in order to find plot points or holes I may have not thought of. A beta reader or editor(Somebody who can add meat to the bones I write) would be nice too but not required. Here's the information for the story as well as summaries and a few quotes for several episodes, order might possibly change when I start posting them, without spoiling the story's main enemy and overall plot. Story starts near the end of Decade and Season 5 of MLP. I'm planning on writing at least ten episodes before I post the first episode so that I can have an episode a week schedule.
Story Synopsis- When Tsukasa travels to the world of Equestria, he is surprised to find himself in a land populated by sentient ponies. Even more surprising, he has become one along with Natsumi and Yusuke! Tsukasa, however, isn't alone. His enemy Narutaki has invaded Equestria and has corrupted the Elements of Harmony by stealing them from the Tree of Harmony, using them to take away Tsukasa's Rider Cards and spreading them across the land to create monsters of Disharmony. Together with Twilight and her friends, Tsukasa plans to gather the Rider Cards and stop the Disharmony Kaijins from destroying Equestria. Kaijin- Ponies that come into contact with a Rider Card transforms into monsters of Disharmony, symbolizing the opposite of one of the Elements. Those whose Element is Magic, however, transform into dark versions of the Riders and are more powerful and smarter than normal Disharmony Kaijins. Tsukasa- Unicorn Natsumi- Pegasus Yusuke- Earth Pony Eijiro- Pegasus Kaito- Unicorn Narutaki- Unknown The Mane Six- Each can use a certain Rider Card to summon said Rider's belts and equipment. It also gives them knowledge of how to use the Rider's equipment and powers. The reason why the Mane Six can use the Rider Cards is because they are the bearer of the Elements of Harmony, which were used in a corrupted form to take away the Rider Cards and infect them with it's chaotic energy. Number of Episodes- 48 Episode 1- Decade of Friendship • The Hikari-Studio lands in a new universe called Equestria that transforms Tsukasa, Natsumi, Onodera, and Eijiro into ponies. Narutaki, however, enacts his latest plan to stop Decade by corrupting the Elements of Harmony to separate the Rider Cards from Decade and Diend. The Rider Cards are spread out across Equestria, turning anypony that touches them into Disharmony Kaijins based on the name of the Rider on the card and gains a personality opposite of one of the elements. One of the Rider Cards lands in Everfree Forest, immediately creating a Disharmony Kaijin and causing the forest to go out of control. Episode 2- Everfree Invasion • The Everfree Forest is advancing on Ponyville again and Tsukasa and Yusuke cannot stop it's growth. To make matters worse, strange monsters called Inves are coming out from within the forest and attacking Ponyville residents, inflicting a dangerous disease onto them. It'll take Twilight Sparkle and the Gaim Rider Card to save the day and stop the Jam Disharmony! Episode 3- From All My Fan-Tas-Tic Pony-Ville Friends • It's time again for Pinkie Pie to plan yet another party, this time to welcome Tsukasa and his friends to Ponyville for their unexpectedly extended visit. Tsukasa, however, has much more serious matters to deal with. There's a Disharmony Kaijin hiding somewhere in the town but Pinkie Pie's attempts at friendship with the young man are getting in the way of him stopping the monster. • Cranky Doodle Donkey- "Just give up and accept it, kid. Pinkie Pie's going to be your friend no matter what." Episode 4- Want to be Friends? • Pinkie Pie picks up the Fourze Rider Card to protect all of her friends from the Meteor Disharmony and proclaims that Tsukasa will be her friend no matter what! • Pinkie Pie as Fourze- "FRIENDSHIP IS AWESOME!!!" Episode 5- Hope for a Better Tomorrow • Tsukasa travels to Manehatten with Rarity in the hopes of finding more Rider Cards. Rarity learns that Trixie has a very big show scheduled soon. Trixie is betting on her next show for her her comeback into stardom but when a new Disharmony appears, intent on stopping Trixie's show at all costs, it'll take both Tsukasa and Rarity to save the show. Episode 6- It's Showtime! • When the Wiseman Disharmony succeeds in stopping Trixie's comeback and plunging the pony into despair, threatening to transform her into a Phantom, it's up to Rarity to use the Wizard Rider Card and give hope to the despairing Trixie! • Wiseman Disharmony- "Let the fear of obscurity drive you to despair!" Episode 7- Time and Time Again • Fluttershy wishes she can rewind time in order to stop herself from experiencing a very embarrassing display in public. When the sun rises, Fluttershy is surprised to find that she's living the exact same day all over again! But when ponies and buildings start disappearing and nopony remembering they existed, it is up to Fluttershy to make sure tomorrow comes! Episode 8- All Aboard The Den-liner • Fluttershy and the passengers of the Den-Liner combine forces in order to defeat the Nega Den-O Disharmony before it can successfully erase the Mane Six from existence. Episode 9- W Crimes • Pinkie Pie finds the Double/W Rider Card and when two separate yet identical crimes happens at the same time, Twilight and her friends will need to solve the mystery of the Double/W Rider Card before the culprit strikes again. Episode 10- A Two-In-One Experience • When the Eternal Disharmony claims it'll destroy all of Ponyville at night, Tsukasa and Twilight's friends must find out how it'll achieve that goal before it's too late. A gust of wind and a wild card might be needed to stop the Eternal Disharmony... • Quotes- "When you steal the smiles of our friends and leave behind tears, you will have to answer to us! We're two friends in one body! Kamen Rider Double! Now... Count Up Your Crimes!" |
06-20-2015, 11:17 AM | #2 |
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Was Narutaki truly a villain? All he typically did was scream at Decade then run away. The villains were usually the villains of the current world he was in.
Anyway, I think you should post your stories as you write them.
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10-18-2015, 03:56 AM | #3 |
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Just cause Decade.
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