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01-25-2015, 07:52 PM | #11 |
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Some hopefully constructive feedback: Don't explain the joke like you did with the arrow in the last panel. You could have averted the use of that arrow by having "dude" somewhere in Fourzy's line in the last panel.
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01-25-2015, 09:11 PM | #12 |
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Lil’ Riders #2- Lunchtime!
Starring: TaToBy, Wiccan, Fourzy, Doubbie
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01-25-2015, 09:22 PM | #13 |
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I will say it again. Kawaii-desu~
(Fourzy still remains my favorite, but TaToBy is funny in this chapter. I do look forward to your next update man! ) Can't wait for the debut of the other children/Lil' Riders.
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01-25-2015, 10:07 PM | #14 |
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I love this. They are all soooo cute! Where did you get the figure for them?
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01-25-2015, 10:08 PM | #15 |
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They're from a candy toy line called 66 Action.
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01-25-2015, 10:09 PM | #16 |
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Oh cool, thank you! ^.^
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01-25-2015, 10:29 PM | #17 |
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Okay, so this will be a two-comic a week series, so tune in next Sunday for the next two parts!
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01-25-2015, 10:31 PM | #18 |
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Quote:
(I demand more Fourzy~! )
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01-25-2015, 10:42 PM | #19 |
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NO!!! *pouts and stamps foot* Too far apart between issues.
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01-25-2015, 10:56 PM | #20 |
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To be fair, he does need time to come up with more ideas for the next few chapters/updates and come up with dialogue for the Lil' Riders.
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