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08-21-2020, 04:16 PM | #1 |
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Alright, so I’m working on a fanfic adaptation of Kyuranger as a Power Rangers series. It can be read here https://archiveofourown.org/works/23918053.
I’ve mostly got by with fic-exclusive fight scenes, but my next chapter will require an extensive one, and a slightly less extensive one. And frankly, I don’t think I can handle either of them to a level I’m going to be happy with. The basic outline for the first fight is that Blue, Gold, Black, Green, Pink, Yellow, Commander and Skyblue are fighting off my main villainess and her grunts. They deal with the grunts, but the villainess proves troublesome because she has a computer chip with all their moves that allows her to anticipate and counteract them. Then partway through the fight, when all seems lost, Orange, Silver and Soldier appear, with Orange and Black and Green and Gold going off separately on their own missions. Then the Rangers start swapping weapons and tactics to confuse the villainess’ chip, allowing them to make some major damage to her. And by the time she recovers enough to prepare a counterattack to this, she gets killed by the Rangers. The second fight has Green and Gold finding Red and saving him from his predicament, then a new villain shows up, leading to a fight. The villain holds them off using weapons and abilities from defeated monsters and generals (basically an evil counterpart to Shishi Red Orion) and then leaves before there’s a clear winner. Any help will be appreciated and you will be given credit when I post the next chapter. |
08-21-2020, 05:29 PM | #2 |
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I know how you feel. Writing fight scenes often stumps me as well and it must be difficult trying to balance 12 rangers and the villains effectively. I may have a few ideas though.
For the first fight, maybe you could consider what would be the most unpredictable tactics based on the rangers' usual fighting styles. For example, Pink is a speed type ranger so she could use the axe configuration. For the second fight, since Gold and Red/Green are present, you could have one of the latter use Sun Mode to change Gold's fighting style. Maybe think of a good reason for the villain to leave in the middle of a fight. Hope that helps. Good luck.
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08-24-2020, 08:09 PM | #3 |
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Saw 3 episodes and already have flushed out a few ideas.
Pink Ranger - speed Strike attack to open a hole. Strongest Rangers take the fight directly Other Rangers pull off a break in and rescue.
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08-26-2020, 01:08 PM | #4 |
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Well the chapter is out now and I managed to do the fight scene. Due credit has been given.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/23...pters/63550384 |
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