Excellent.

And part 3 is up!

Jesus Christ, this is taking forever to load....
Stupid teacher, uploading all the lessons online when I could be talking to strangers....

*hug* It'll take a minute, I swear. Okay?

Are we? Just making sure too.

I have to do homework on interest.

Yes, of course. But then again even constructive feedback can be subjective, yes? You take some you agree with, and others that you don't agree with, you think about for a bit. If it still doesn't sound right, then you could decide to do it your way.

And of course, pandering is bad.

Oh, thank you! That's something I have to keep it mind, it's easy to forget. When I get comments and stuff, I struggle with whether I should change it, because I don't always agree. I guess as always, it's about finding a balance.

Oh yeah, that's the other beauty of the serialised format. I mean, look at all the current superheroes. They're starkly different to how they first came around decades ago, the stuff that's a big deal will change over time, and it just improves.

I guess it depends on the attitude with which you approach it. If you're anxious it won't really work out so well. But if you've had time to settle I think it can do good.

Funny how stuff works. I guess your expectations were quite high, since it was an important bit in the plot.

algo says I may be re-reading my stuff too much. It might start to look worse each time.

Thanks.

Really? I thought it was one of the more memorable ones from the first act too.