But your entire story revolves around them! You've done a good job working on them.

My favourite scenes to write are conversations between friends.

Thank you.

Anyhow I've edited some parts of the first chapter. Mostly to try a "showing" style instead of telling. Also trying the second chapter, but have absolutely no idea how to write fight scenes. That'll be doubly embarrassing.

I really can't promise that. Besides, if I sleep too early, I can't fall asleep either. It's such a delicate balance.

Rest assured it will be before 12:30 am at latest.

I slept 4 hours last night, and it's starting to affect my work noticeably. My boss was not too happy today.

Good morning then. I will need a long, deep sleep tonight.

Did you not sleep?

Oh nothing, don't worry...go to bed! Just poking around.

Superstar!

Okie dokie then.

Interesting set-up for future plotlines.