No you haven't, and gee...I wonder why they like it so much?

I see. Well, I'm off to bed. I'll let you know my thoughts on more episodes. I really should post those thoughts in the fanfic thread, so said thread doesn't die.

Waterside Panic? It wasn't THAT much of a beach episode. needed more pervy guys.

Alright...

Oki doki loki.

Why did you use quotations? HOW DO YOU HAVE FANSERVICE IN TEXT?!? (Sorry, I get a bit crazy this late at night...)

I know what Pig Latin is.

He's ok. He's only shown up, like twice where I am. I don't see what all the hubbub is other than his design.

Ok. I mean, as long as he grows. (Which I trust you to do, because if none of your characters developed you'd never hear the end of it from me. )

Oh!

Oh my God.

I guess.

Uchi.

You don't know the half of it.

So...he's the guy from the Lego Movie? I don't know...it just sometimes feels like stuff is just happening around him, and he's just like...I dunno. *shrugs*

Oh, ok...wait, vulgar?

So, yeah. Pretty good, with my only major complaint being pacing, and the minor thing of Alex being a bit bland. Though I'm only on chapter 8, so he still has tons of room to grow.

I thought Madison mixing up her Ps and Bs was a typo at first. Though your pacing issues are still there, particularly in how fast he found Shredder (Y U NO MAKE TMNT REFERENCE! ) The previous episodes...I wasn't planning on liking Madison...but it's really hard not to like her. Marcoh reminds me of Adachi from Persona 4 a bit (I would go into details, but spoilers). Although I read his lines in a really silly voice, so it helps subvert that. My only real problem so far is the pacing. The characterization is very good for where I am Sampson being one of my favorites, if not my favorite, though Alex can be a bit bland sometimes (He just feels like a typical High School student), and I do think Fata is a weird name, unless there's some meaning behind it I don't know.

So how are you this fine and lovely new day, wherever you are?

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Time to dine on Xtreme soup!