Well Daigen episode 2 is up. If you want something good to read, go read it. It's some of the best stuff you'll ever find on this here forum!

Modesty still eludes you :lol

You promote your way, I'll promote my way :lol

Just a reminder that the first episode of Evoranger is up!

Read and Enjoyed!

Xtreme 3:

SON OF A GUNCANNON!!!

Rylee is a cop?!? I what?!? No! This sucks! I mean...like dang, the Dopants have someone who's good with the cops...man...I'm not saying it sucks from a storytelling perspective, but it seriously sucks for out main heroes. Also what's Sampson's story?

I mean...these first episodes are a bit rough, Gunny. There are some pacing issues here and there, and there are usage errors and typos more than I'd like (sorry, just when people use the wrong "to/too/two" "their/there/they're" etc. it really bothers me personally, as it's a pet peeve of mine).

Yup, that pretty much sums up everyone's reaction to that plot twist. Believe me that's not the only time you'll be cursing me. :lol

Yeah, I really need to go back and rewrite the whole thing don't I? Ah well, a little too late for that know I guess. :o

The errors get better around episode 12 or so once I got Algo as an editor I swear. :lol

Sorry for the double post but I can't stress this enough NO SPOILING XTREME FOR SIDESWIPE OR ANYONE ELSE!!!

He isnt kiddin, I curse him almost every episode :lol

Im just glad I finally caught up to the recent one which reminds me, onore! :lol

I still find it amusing that gun gets more onores then I do :lol Guess he's better at pissing you all off then I am :lolol

No, I'm just a better writer then you. :p

Sir I shall not get into an argument with you over who is better. I shall prove it like a man would...I challenge thee to a game of fisticuffs!

Oh...y-yay...

You do care. :)

Xtreme 4:

Hey! He got his bike! What is with works of ficion, and getting stuff from the cops? In Persona 3 it's weapons and armor, and here Alex gets his bike...

No need to thank me, your suffering will be thanks enough. {insert evil laugh}

You did the same for me with the whole AliTwi thing, only fair I return the favor. :)

I find it funny how what you did here was akin to giving someone a black eye, then offering to ice it. :lol

and thanks. :)

That's the joke. :lol

Ok.

Because cops are awesome like that. :)

Sampson is a different kind of cop in case you haven't noticed. :lol

Work on Dreamranger the movie is going pretty well. For those interested, it will be out after episode 20 of Dreamranger. And along with it, comes a sister movie.

NOTHING TO SEE HERE PEOPLE!!! :o

Yeah, he reminds me of Kurosawa from Persona 3. :lol

Sampson reminds many people of many characters, I welcome each and every one of them. :)

Didnt I say one time Sampson reminds me of Col truman from RPM? Id say Marcoh is his assistant then.

There's a character in Power Rangers that as big of a dick as Marcoh? That's surprising. :lol

I forget how much of one he is, I forget he is there until someone brings up APD :lol

That's essentially Marcoh in a nutshell. Because when you do things right, people won't think you've done anything at all... though I did get a lot of flack for him shouting at Sarah awhile back. :lol

Another fanfic I was writing is up now. Kamen Rider Exor is here!

Kamen Rider Xtreme Episodes 8 and 9:

They were pretty good. It's nice to see more of a character to Alex. He felt a bit bland, but I think he had some good moments in these episodes. So, how was Alex able to beat Shredder so easily? Was Fata that weak? or were the Dopants back then weaker than they are now? Other than that, these were pretty good.

My thoughts on the first arc...It's pretty good. There's a lot of potential here. My main problem being pacing, and the nitpick of Alex being a bit bland (until episodes 8 and 9). Also, why has he never called himself Xtreme? Most Kamen Riders choose their name first, then append Kamen Rider to it, so that's been kind of bothering me. There are also some funny typos here and there. So...so far, I'd give Xtreme an 8/10. Very good, the reason I give it this, and not a 6 like I was originally intending, is because this is just the first act of a, what I'm assuming, is a 5 arc story. So, I have to judge it with that in mind. As a half season it's rather good, but if this was it? Eh... (I hope that made sense.)

Sweet, glad to hear you liked it. :) Also, I should mention that there will be a total of six acts once it's all done so we're about half way through at the moment. Just need to finish the last episode of Act Three and we will be officially halfway.

As for your other two questions... I can't say due to spoilery reasons. :o

I'm curious though, what was it that changed your opinion of Alex?

Alright, cool.

Fine.

It just felt like he was lacking passion until now, and I felt like he didn't have much bearings in this whole Dopants and Rider thing. I feel like he has more of a reason to be there now.

Makes sense, I've always felt he was a bit off in the early episodes but that was back when I was still figuring out his character. He'll be much better from here on out I promise. :)

Also, I know you've technically already met her but when you get to Tara's introduction arc would you mind telling me your first impression of her? :)

Ok. I trust you.

Sure, but I'm not even halfway through the crossover. :lol

I know, I was only asking. :lol

I've thought out the Rider for 02 of Dove.

Kamen Rider SC (Suppression Control). A Kamen Rider loyal to the forces of Horizon with a SWAT/Police feel. The new episode will also see Dove get her first 'upgrade'.

I need some help! I have Episode 2 of Exor planned, and a possible Episode 3 and 4 plot that involves the same monster in both episodes. Should I put another monster in between 2 and 3? Cause 3 and 4 involves a major character being introduced.

Hm...probably not.

Kamen Rider Xtreme X Kamen Rider Magica: Magica half...

It was pretty good, if a bit long. I feel like Magca's death wasn't dramatic enough...though that could be because it's text, and I have no visuals to go off of, like in a show it'd probably be in slow motion or something, and there would be some dramatic music, and you can't have that in text, so...

Anyway, I liked it, and I kinda wanna draw Marika now. :lol