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Pretty good so far. Kind of has a Shakugan no Shana and Digimon Tamers feel to it, which I like. The rangers balance each other out nicely with Paige being the childish innocent, Keiji the blunt second in command and Syuri (not sure how to pronounce that) the leader. Also, Aimi works well to introduce the reader to the world of the Dreamrangers which is always a good thing. You always need a parable to learn about the world in a scifi/fantasy world as the reader does, anyone who says otherwise is lying.

Anyway, getting back on topic... Nice work I can't wait for more!