[Galvantula]

OK I apologize for bringing this topic back but I need help. So far I have not gotten any meaningful reviews about my first story, just people whining about the lack of Gwen and Kevin in the story.

I really would like to know just what it is I'm doing wrong here.

Edit: Removed link and want to let people know I only have one chapter left to go on this. My second story is almost complete!