[Klonoahedgehog]

I want to see if people think this is at least decent, this is a part of Lesson 1.

Meanwhile just outside of town, the dog monster was eating some of hi's stolen apples. He was really enjoying them until somebody just yelled out to him. "Diamond Dog! What are you doing?" The dog looked back and stood up. "Sunset Shimmer! I just having a snack!" He took out one apple and held it out to her. "Want one?" She looked at it for a bit and smack it out of hi's hand. "Didn't i tell you to eliminate the Elements of Harmony!?" Yelled Shimmer with a blazing fire behind her. He stammered for a bit. "Well it hard to find them when avoiding those stinky humans!" "Then don't! Just straight up destroy them until you find those elements!" She then snapped her fingers and many smaller dark monsters appeared around her. "Just take these and get out of my sight." She then disappeared in a puff of flames. The Diamond Dog then looked around at the monsters and then looked at the city. "What we waiting for? Go!" And he walked into that direction with the monsters following behind him.

The wait for negative criticism gets me like this.