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Originally Posted by SideswipePrime

Xtreme 3:

SON OF A GUNCANNON!!!

Rylee is a cop?!? I what?!? No! This sucks! I mean...like dang, the Dopants have someone who's good with the cops...man...I'm not saying it sucks from a storytelling perspective, but it seriously sucks for out main heroes. Also what's Sampson's story?

I mean...these first episodes are a bit rough, Gunny. There are some pacing issues here and there, and there are usage errors and typos more than I'd like (sorry, just when people use the wrong "to/too/two" "their/there/they're" etc. it really bothers me personally, as it's a pet peeve of mine).

Yup, that pretty much sums up everyone's reaction to that plot twist. Believe me that's not the only time you'll be cursing me.

Yeah, I really need to go back and rewrite the whole thing don't I? Ah well, a little too late for that know I guess.

The errors get better around episode 12 or so once I got Algo as an editor I swear.