[Galvantula]

Well, it's been a fun little ride for me. Portal is not my strong point, but I hope I was able to make characters act the way they should, at least that's what I hope.

I'm still learning Fanfiction and its rules, making mistakes and hopefully learning not to make them again.

I only hope that someday, I'll be able to be a much better writer, as right now, I'm kinda goofing up more than I should.

I must thank you for reading this and I hope you will enjoy my other works!

Edit as of 10/21/12: Right now I'm working on the second part of my Ben 10 Trilogy, which has Fourze characters in it, but I've hit a slump. No one at FF.Net is reading my stories and I fear I may just be a bad writer.

If anyone that is reading this thinks they can help me out, Pm or let me know via my homepage here at Tokunation.

I don't know what it is I'm doing wrong here. I think I got the personailtes right for the most part and I will correct spelling and grammar mistakes, but I'm at a stopping point.

I just really need some help with this. I don't know why people aren't even bothering to leave a review. I got a few reviews, but for the most part they are just spam.

I am getting really frustrated over the lack of opinions about this story. I know there are areas to improve, but until someone points those out, I'm at a total loss.