[Aoi Kurenai]

There are a few lines that gave me pause. There were a small few lines changed in meaning. (the kid didn't ask if he's dying, he asked if he was really sick) I think those are stylistic choices that people won't always agree with but as of the first episode I didn't notice any actual mistakes that would lead me against recommending them.

That said, their stylistic choice is something they need to keep in check so as to ensure it never messes with the actual plot of the show.