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Originally Posted by henshinzero

I just thought about rebooting the 13 races.

And blood wounds are what I'm looking for.

The Checkmate Four? If it was remade, the four would be formerly five, because they used to have a "Knight" in their group once. Imagine a fangire teaming up with Kiva named Knight. IXA is a "knight" but is out to kill Fangires. Their foot soldiers should be called "Pawns" just to complete the army. Pawns are bat fangires except they're based on fruit bats. They'd be in reality victims turned slaves.

Following bits of the novel, the hero's rider form would be his half-breed form.

First of all, there is nothing wrong with the 13 as they are. If anything, expand on the 5 we never saw and explain why Legendorga are so varied. You don't need to toss on the Khajiit, Judeo-Christian Theology and Yokai Watch.

The fact the Checkmate Four are 4 is intrinsic to Japanese culture with the words for 4 and Death being the same, you aren't adding the other 2 peice types and expecting to keep that.

We already have a Kamen Rider Knight in Ryuki, we don't need another. Besides, just flush out Saga as being more of a turncoat. You have a Rider, who is a Fangire (and royalty at that), who fights Fangire. Rework that so Taiga breaks the chain and commits high treason against his bloodline and people by siding with humans for their sake.