[dreamcastegirl]

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Originally Posted by TheRaizin

When you make longer ones? These short stories are great, but in the end it just leaves me wanting for more.

Haha, that's very nice of you to say. I try and approach these little fics as being fast food, you're just supposed to quickly eat them and then throw them away. Mostly, they're shorter in tone because I'm just writing them for fun in-between bigger projects. I do have a larger Zi-o story I need to finish, but I think I may break that up into chapters, as just reading 13,000 words of me talking about the characters of that show is, I'm sure, enough to stretch anyone's attention.

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These are really good, but if I could hnn "stretch for minor nitpicks" here, Mei would be the type to voice her concerns instead of sitting and thinking of it. Such as the scene where Mei saw a guy being ecstatic of seeing the wonder world and she remarked, loudly, "what a weird guy!".

I get you, I get you, noted and thank you. It's difficult because I'm trying to present Mei in a different light as we don't get to see her much outside of her interaction with Touma &c. so I took a little creative license and toned her down just a smidgen.