[TheRaizin]

Read up on the third and fourth chapter of the Build/MHA fic. Interesting for you to bring in Pony into this. A fairly minor character. I'm assuming because you like her or something

Very, uhh... interesting that you decided to basically give most, if not, all of the the Build cast their own quirks. I'm assuming this is to explain the Build cast's sometimes more than average human feats, such as Sento's abiility to invent his tools. How do I say this without sounding harsh...

I guess it kinda cheapens the stuff the cast do. Especially Sento. Him having this big brain quirk implies that his weapons were only developed because he had the quirk to help him with it. Unlike in the original, where it was purely his own intellect that allowed him to do so. Or Misora, her quirk may not work on everyone, but it gives off the impression that her skills are assisted by her quirk, instead of it being 100% her. Y'see what I mean?

That was my, uh, 'little' complaint, I guess. Still fairly entertained for the rest of it.

Altho, this might be stretching a bit far into the story, but since this fic doesn't follow the movie, how would it, say, explain the Hell bros? I know it's still a bit far, but in the show, Sento specifically name drops the Kaisers when he sees the Hell Bros for the first time, making the HeiGen Final movie canon. The Hell Bros are/were based from the Kaisers.