[DreamSword]

After discussing it over PMs withe Sh Ranger, we have decided on one final challenge.

This one being a tiebreaker between Sh Ranger and Androzani! Anyone else is free to participate, but the grand prize will only be handed out to one of these two members. Everyone else in the thread gets to help in another way, however.

The challenge, should you choose to accept it, is a writing challenge, and one I decided to keep simple. The prompt is as follows:

During the final episode of the LP, we all discussed how despite the plot not being bad overall, it definitely gets muddy in certain areas. Write me an essay discussing what you would've liked to have seen done differently, expanded upon, cut, what have you.

Judging will be decided via not just my own reactions to each post, but everyone else's' as well.

So, have at it.