[WhiteRanger]

ok guys i had an idea and planning to publish it on kindle publishing. the story title is called Thomas Homes vs the Dark shadows its going to be a kamen rider/super sentai style story with one main hero but gain the power from different god of north and Greek gods for different power up and for different Mecha. i will post down below the intro paragraph and the first 2 Paragraphs of Chapter one for you guys to read a give me ideas and feed back.


In the forest far from the city and country around the world there was a temple and in this temple there was a boy who was in trusted with the key to protect the earth and that was he mission given to him by the god’s of old, this boys name was Thomas Homes.

Chapter One: Army rose from the Dark Shadows

One Morning Thomas woke up with his hair messed up and and was yawning to stay awake he was tall with short black hair and has brown eyes, he moved his blanket with his hand and then moved his legs off the mattress and got up. “Man how long was a sleep I have a big day head of me and I can’t let myself be late” Said Thomas with tired voice still waking up. When he got up he when straight to the bath room washed his face and got dressed and then picked up a a box style with different colour jewels and with lock on it he got the key that was around his neck and opened it, in the box was a old mystical device that when wield by the chosen person and becomes the hero and the protector of the earth.

Thomas picked up the Device as he then heard noise from outside curios what it was he opened the door and looked, there he saw a shadow but it was not a shadow of anything that was around he then saw he begin to move closer to him and begins to take a physical shape. This Shadow had big long arms with sharp claws at the end as long fang like teeth at his mouth. His eyes were like blood red eye and can see everything around him. Thomas looked at it then held the mystical item up in to the sky as it changes to a weird looking mobile phone as he then calls out the god chosen phrase “ protecting the earth is my Duty” as a beam of light came down on to Thomas as armour formed around him the mystic device that is now a mobile appear on his wrist as the helmet forges a on his face and a sword forming on his back and a gun on his side as the beam goes Thomas was full covered in a suit of armour.