[Golden King]

hello this is my first atempt at fan fiction so Im a little nerves. I trying to do a robot themed sentai but there is still there is a lot I am working on with it. but I did wrote out an opening scene for it. plese read it and tell me what you think and I will get back to you guys with more of my ideas

Mecharanger first takes place off earth on a distant plant filled with giant (Megazord size) robots, and on that plant a fight is going with a team of seven Sentai looking mecha fighting an unknown foe. As the fight progresses the pink, yellow, blue, and green mechs go down one after another leaving the red, bronze, and gray mechs still fighting. The bronze mech suddenly disappears and reappears a moment latter holding forur pink, yellow, blue, and green hexagonal components only to be shot down after handing them to the gray mech. The red mech then bends down to the bronze mech and takes out a bronze component similar to the ones that the bronze mech retrieved in the first place. After getting the component the last two remaining mechs retreated to a nearby shelter as the gray mech started to work on a computer next to a giant arc like devise in the same building as them. As a portal opens inside the arc the buildings wall is blown down only to show a silt house of another mech with a giant hook. The new mech raises its’ hook arm and the red mech begins to be crushed. The gray mech tries to shoot down the attacker only to be block by another bulkier mech. As the red mech is being crushed he yells to the gray mech “GET GOING NOW! THAT”S AN ORDER!” then the red mechs reaches into his chest and pulls out another hexagonal component that was red and had the number one on it and throws it to the gray mech. The gray mech then stands there looking at the red mech as it powers down until a purple mech starts to come after him. He runs to the portal desperately avoiding the other mech fire. Once he got completely through the portal it closed. The gray mech reappears on earth in a forest towering over the trees. The mech looks into the sky, scanning the satellites. Then it starts to mess with a devise on its right arm until it began to shrink and then it turns in to a human male.