Critique needed

Tenagara · 10-05-2014, 10:50 PM

My friend and I made a Kamen Rider-related video and would appreciate feedback.

Sunred · 10-08-2014, 07:12 PM

In the "starring" part when you have the nut riders maybe have the voiceover say "NUTS, NUTS," and then cut to a swarm of Kurokage troopers and say "AND THESE NUTS"

Guyver Spawn · 10-08-2014, 07:36 PM

I kinda like it. It was a fun spoof of honest trailers videos. I got a good laugh at the end.

GoseiWonder · 10-08-2014, 07:50 PM

Miley Citrus!

2ndSndWve · 10-08-2014, 07:55 PM

I thought it was pretty good.

10-05-2014, 10:50 PM	#1
Tenagara Almost IXA Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Nashua, NH Posts: 4	My friend and I made a Kamen Rider-related video and would appreciate feedback. __________________

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Sunred Ex-Weather Three leader Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 11,686	In the "starring" part when you have the nut riders maybe have the voiceover say "NUTS, NUTS," and then cut to a swarm of Kurokage troopers and say "AND THESE NUTS" __________________ Last edited by Sunred; 10-08-2014 at 09:39 PM..

10-08-2014, 07:55 PM	#5
2ndSndWve Forever a sniper Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Maine Posts: 3,804	I thought it was pretty good. __________________ I got stuff for sale!