[henshinzero]

Actually a LOT of things Fourze needs to fix!

I like the high school settings.

- It would be nice to see some replacements of the KR Club. If some go to college have new members join in and old ones visit them later on in the end.

New members based on: Stronger, Skyrider, Super-1 & ZO.

- Change the Horoscopes from the school board to a student council. The chairman can still be the main antagonist. But there are things I wanna change.... the Horoscopes are twelve members of the student council. The chairman... Gamou Mitsuaki will be Ophiuchus instead.

One of the horoscopes however, betrays them to join the good guys. In fact, Sagittarius can be Gamou's grandson.

- Get rid of Ohsugi!

- Have Kengo become Fourze just once!

[Galvantula]

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Originally Posted by henshinzero

Actually a LOT of things Fourze needs to fix!

I like the high school settings.

- It would be nice to see some replacements of the KR Club. If some go to college have new members join in and old ones visit them later on in the end.

New members based on: Stronger, Skyrider, Super-1 & ZO.

- Change the Horoscopes from the school board to a student council. The chairman can still be the main antagonist. But there are things I wanna change.... the Horoscopes are twelve members of the student council. The chairman... Gamou Mitsuaki will be Ophiuchus instead.

One of the horoscopes however, betrays them to join the good guys. In fact, Sagittarius can be Gamou's grandson.

- Get rid of Ohsugi!

- Have Kengo become Fourze just once!

Gentaro is based on Stronger to a lesser decree than the others; but he still counts. His plot in Megamax is a condensed version of how Stronger gained his super mode. Likewise for Skyrider: Ryusei filled in that role but it was only stated during a Kamen Rider Quiz Time.

[Locke]

edit: wrong thread oops lol that's never happened before

[henshinzero]

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Originally Posted by Galvantula

Gentaro is based on Stronger to a lesser decree than the others; but he still counts. His plot in Megamax is a condensed version of how Stronger gained his super mode. Likewise for Skyrider: Ryusei filled in that role but it was only stated during a Kamen Rider Quiz Time.

Really?

Didn't know that.

Gentaro -> Stronger
Ryusei -> Skyrider

But if there were other new members. How about those based on Super-1 & ZO?

And what do you think of changing the Horoscopes from the school board to a student council? Controlling the entire student body and transforming several students into zodiarts.

- Aries should be the main leader
- Ophiuchus should be Gamou... the big bad boss... the MASTERMIND!

[henshinzero]

On Kabuto, Den-O Kiva & Fourze.

Would you rewrite EVERYTHING!?

[SideswipePrime]

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Originally Posted by Matrixbeast

I don't think it was the 2 episode format for Wizard, it was just that they didn't do anything for a good 20 episodes.
Like, between Phoenix's death and up until we started getting the Mages, it was just:
Gremlin messes with Medusa
Medusa says Wiseman
Haruto eats donut
Shunpei
Learn about a secondary character that will only appear in these 2 episodes.
End part 1.
Phantom almost breaks the important object of secondary character
Showcase latest toy
Shunpei
Mayonnaise
End with Haurto eating.

It's rather strange that, for Wizard, you could cut about 20 episodes straight (Without henpecking them, either. Just remove them altogether) and lose almost nothing of value.

Yeah that bothered me about Wizard. I also felt that it had this lack of energy to it.

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Originally Posted by SPLIT LIP

I'd shorten almost every one by six episodes minimum. That way there'd be less filler, and all the remaining content could be managed into a more compact seeries. Even W, my fav, has easily six episodes it doesn't need.

For individual shows:

OOO: Drop "Lost Ankh." Or rework it so it doesn't confuse exactly how core medals work.

Ryuki: Limit Ouja to be a more infrequent character to maximize his appearences, and give him something of a personality. Not soem ham-fisted backstory, but some charrisma, some interesting character trait.

Den-O: Drop the ridiculous time-altering visuals, like when they have buildings lose their supports ten years ago, and collapse in the present. Have Ryoutaro be more of a character eariler, like him dealing with the fact he's basically a suit from Imagin to fight in, and move forward his subplot about accepting it and trying to help by physically training himself.

Agito: Cut this motherfucker in half, drop the fresh-out-of-film-school cinematography, and make Agito more than just an apathetic moron who values tomatoes more than human lives. And give Gills somethign to do besides scream and grunt.

Wizard: Have Haruto be an actual straight man, rather than just someone immune to the obnoxious comedy, have him react to it. Make the villains credible, give it a plot, give it side characters that don't annoy. Give it a better gimmick... just rework the whole damn thing.

Kabuto: Kill Tendou.

That's actually a change I would like to see in Den-O.

[SPLIT LIP]

It's not even a "change" in Den-O, just an acceleration. Cut out the filler and you get a more cohesive story that moves quicker.

[henshinzero]

If only they made Fourze a dark series. All of Gentaro's talk of friendship makes nothing but lies.

Fourze would've at least had three riders instead of two.

Couldn't they add an opposite of Gentaro? Kengo is no opposite.

[NGW]

Fourze doesn't need to be a "dark" series. There's a reason, a very good reason, it was as fun and lighthearted as it was and it made for one of the most fun seasons of this franchise that I've personally sat through. Not everything needs to be grimdark to be good. Ryuki manged it fairly well, W had a solid balance between it, and Fourze even had some good, dramatic moments without being needlessly dark and brooding about it.

[ZeoRangerV]

Yeah, rewriting Fourze as dark kinda destroys the whole point of it. At that stage you may as well just write a brand new show in its stead.