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#81 |
Big Bad Wolf.
Join Date: Apr 2013
Location: Raiding tombs.
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Watching Blade - I'm like 12 episodes in - here is how I'd improve those first 12 episodes.
I'd take Hajime out, not Chalice, Chalice is awesome but I'd completely redo his character from the ground up. Hajime's rivalry with Kenzaki is contextless and his follow up stories are basically tacked on filler and that is insulting considering Chalice is the coolest Rider in the show. Give Garren an arc before the fear one. We know nothing of Tachibana so he just comes across a little pathetic when he starts Hulking to death. If we could have had an arc which highlighted just how much of a fearless badass he was, then we could care more about his story. I'd tighten the focus. I actually think it's best when less is going on, rather than more, as episodes tend to jump all over the place. This isn't a soap opera, pick a story and stick with that one until it's done. I'd also completely redo all of the special attacks, they all look terrible.
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#82 |
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Join Date: Dec 2013
Posts: 791
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I would work the multi-series baddies Organization X into it more. I mean where were they in wizard? I hope they somehow show up in gaim. I mean fueki could have gotten help from them in doing what he did.
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#83 |
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Join Date: Jan 2014
Location: U.S.A.
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I would work the multi-series baddies Organization X into it more. I mean where were they in wizard? I hope they somehow show up in gaim. I mean fueki could have gotten help from them in doing what he did.
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#84 |
The Patient Observer
Join Date: Apr 2014
Location: Wakanda
Posts: 1,093
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I would have changed W so that it ended on 48, and instead of making a pointless Kamen Rider Eternal movie, make instead a movie dealing with Shotaro being Fuuto's lone protector and Philip recompiling in the Xtreme memory overtime. That way we'd get plenty of Shotaro by himself, dealing with being alone in his fight against crime, and Philip's return a growing plot and struggle for him. AND GIVEN SKULL HIS OWN MOVIE GOD DAMMIT.
I would have given Den-O a better villain, introduced a bit earlier. But that's literally it. |
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#85 |
fencer of gold
Join Date: Dec 2012
Posts: 233
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i personnaly would have liked to see in wizard:
1.have phoenix come back mega-powerful due to all the times he dies and ressurected while bieng trapped in the sun(though i'm not sure i want him back as a rider or as the final villian) 2.work more with haruto's relation to dragon and actually have him fail in stopping a gate from becoming a phantom at least once 3.work all hell lot more with koyomi and fueki's stroy and background OOO: 1.bring ankh's background from the noval into the show as a build-up for tajadol debut 2.bring the original OOO as the final villian 3.keep the whole stroy with the purple medals but put it earlier in the show rather then making it the build-up for the finale 4.the greed got sealed beacuse the original OOO tried to scan all 30 medal types and failed make the final form for the OOO show eiji succesfully scaning all medals and unlocking the ultimate form of OOO fourze: 2 words: zodiart rider W: 2 words: nasca rider decade: add dark decade but i already posted this in 2 differnt threads here: if you want to undrestand decade read stephen king's "dark tower" series and then look at decade from that point of veiw
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#86 |
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Join Date: Jan 2014
Posts: 2,571
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Yui Kanzaki is a fucking terrible character. She's whiny, she has no character development to speak of, she's annoying, she has no personality to speak of and she doesn't do anything to help out the protagonists.
She's a void of the character that the entire Ryukiverse is based on due to the Rider powers being made to give her a new life. Her shittiness as a character is so bad, it affects others around her. I look at Shinji, Ren and Shiro, at their developments as characters and what they aspire for and think to myself, "This was all going to be squandered so one person with no motivation or personality could live." Ren had a fiance to save so he could change his life. Shinji wanted to save others and went outside of his normal boundaries in order to do it. And Shirou wanted to save his sister so badly that he created this sick game, kept trying to accomplish his goal despite death and realized he was wrong in his intentions. Now look at Yui, does she change? No, is worried about her brother in the same way from episode 1 to 50. Does she help out the main chracters? In the first 2 episodes, she saves Shinji from being killed by Ren and told Shiji how to use the deck. And the story gives her the beginning of a subplot of revealing the truth about the nature of the Rider War, but that was given to Reiko from ORE journal. She becomes more of a burden later on with the Alternative storyline and her planning to comit suicide. Even characters that don't do anything like Hina from OOO, they still have a personality. Usually when a plot happens, there is development and payoff. Yui is the pay off of all of the bloodshed, change and death throughout all of Ryuki. She affects every other character by making their contribution to Shinji and Ren's character development have the shittiest payoff I have ever seen for any sort of plot I have seen in any sort of Fiction so far including the Rider series I have seen And this is what I believe was Kamen Rider Ryuki's biggest flaw, Yui. You can't fix a problem like this in an alternate ending. She's still fucking whiny and useless in the movie. This character needed to be rewritten. I'm not saying she was a bad idea, I mean her existence creates the interesting dilemmas of Alternative and Shirou it that she was poorly written and acted.
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#87 |
Junior Member
Join Date: May 2014
Posts: 149
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Okay, everyone who is saying that somebody should have actually become a Phantom in Wizard. You're missing the point. Wizard was about how hope in the face of despair could take on anything and win. If Haruto were to fail in saving somebody from becoming a Phantom, that would invalidate the entire show. ...Okay, maybe it wasn't a very sharp point, but it's still a point!
Also, why does this topic even exist? Yeah, some series aren't my favorite, and all of them have their flaws, but to just rewrite them in its entirety just feels like Fan Wank to me. Of course, that's just my opinion; YMMV after all. |
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#88 |
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Join Date: May 2014
Posts: 1,464
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There 2 Kamen Rider show in mind I would make the show better.
Fourze- Give Gentaro more character development. I feel Gentaro didn't have more character development as he was guy who want to make friend with everyone even the bad guy. I would have him be fron happy-go-lucky guy to more serious guy Get rid of Yuki Jojima, replace her with Zodiart Rider I feel Fourze was more comedy show. They say Kamen Rider is Batman of Japan but Fourze is not like him. Make the show little bit dark. For the Movie. Get rid of Kyodain, Inazuman and Akumaizer and replace them with Movie-Excluise Kamen Rider. Toei have waste an opportunity to have Evil Rider in Fourze Movie (Don't get me start in OOO Movie) instead they have Forgotten character from old show that younger didn't care for. This is my idea for Movie Exclusive Kamen Rider for Fourze. For Kamen Rider Fourze: The Movie. Have 2 Evil Kamen Rider who are Brother and Sister take Kyodain's duo place and they are robots. Their name will be Kamen Rider Ground and Kamen Rider Sky and 1 Good Kamen Rider who is Inga's Robotic Bodyguard and his name will be Kamen Rider Knight. For Kamen Rider Wizard and Fourze Crossover. Have 1 Anti-Hero Kamen Rider in Fourze's segment. His name will be Kamen Rider Monster. And have Dark Version of 3 Kamen Rider as main villain (Dark Kamen Rider W, OOO and Fourze) Wizard- That's easy. NO MORE GATES OF THE WEEK. as they are annoying din't get me start Bird Arc. Get Rid of that (God-Awful) theme song. I become anti against this song. No more of that 2 filler episode arc. They serve no purpose but annoy the audience. Get better head writer like Yasuko Kobayashi instead that Tsyoshi Kiba. It's Magic Show! Make it like Magiranger! Get rid of Phoenix and Medusa. It just I don't like them. It just that they are not interesting villain. They like Blandness like Phoenix is Hayden Christensen of Japan and Medusa (my least favorite villain) is Kristen Stewart of Japan. And Finally Make Wizard's suit design more Kamen Rider. Wizard got to be my least-favorite Kamen Rider Design ever! It doesn't resemble Kamen Rider at all! (It missing the eye like Beast and the mouth like Gaim) Last edited by Baltan II; 06-16-2014 at 07:33 PM.. |
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#89 |
Junior Member
Join Date: May 2014
Posts: 149
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There 2 Kamen Rider show in mind I would make the show better.
Fourze- Give Gentaro more character development. I feel Gentaro didn't have more character development as he was guy who want to make friend with everyone even the bad guy. I would have him be fron happy-go-lucky guy to more serious guy Get rid of Yuki Jojima, replace her with Zodiart Rider I feel Fourze was more comedy show. They say Kamen Rider is Batman of Japan but Fourze is not like him. Make the show little bit dark. For the Movie. Get rid of Kyodain, Inazuman and Akumaizer and replace them with Movie-Excluise Kamen Rider. Toei have waste an opportunity to have Evil Rider in Fourze Movie (Don't get me start in OOO Movie) instead they have Forgotten character from old show that younger didn't care for. This is my idea for Movie Exclusive Kamen Rider for Fourze. For Kamen Rider Fourze: The Movie. Have 2 Evil Kamen Rider who are Brother and Sister take Kyodain's duo place and they are robots. Their name will be Kamen Rider Ground and Kamen Rider Sky and 1 Good Kamen Rider who is Inga's Robotic Bodyguard and his name will be Kamen Rider Knight. For Kamen Rider Wizard and Fourze Crossover. Have 1 Anti-Hero Kamen Rider in Fourze's segment. His name will be Kamen Rider Monster. And have Dark Version of 3 Kamen Rider as main villain (Dark Kamen Rider W, OOO and Fourze) Gentarou actually DID have character development. It was subtle, but it was there. When he started, he cared about the number of friends. He still cared about them as people, but he was a bit more concerned with the number, in my opinion of course. As the show went on, the journey to becoming someone's friend and his bond with them became more important. Also, Gentarou had plenty of serious moments, but making that his entire character would mean that he wasn't Gentarou. As for evil Riders...what the hell is everyone's obsession with them?! I actually like the Akumaizers and the Space Ironmen and Inazuman. Yeah, I have no clue who they are, but I still liked them. |
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#90 |
Junior Member
Join Date: May 2014
Posts: 149
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Wizard- That's easy. NO MORE GATES OF THE WEEK. as they are annoying din't get me start Bird Arc.
Get Rid of that (God-Awful) theme song. I become anti against this song. No more of that 2 filler episode arc. They serve no purpose but annoy the audience. Get better head writer like Yasuko Kobayashi instead that Tsyoshi Kiba. It's Magic Show! Make it like Magiranger! Get rid of Phoenix and Medusa. It just I don't like them. It just that they are not interesting villain. They like Blandness like Phoenix is Hayden Christensen of Japan and Medusa (my least favorite villain) is Kristen Stewart of Japan. And Finally Make Wizard's suit design more Kamen Rider. Wizard got to be my least-favorite Kamen Rider Design ever! It doesn't resemble Kamen Rider at all! (It missing the eye like Beast and the mouth like Gaim) I'm starting to wonder why I even made this account in the first place. All I'm seeing around here lately is complaining about things you don't like, and I could have seen that without an account! |
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