[Darth Kalacius]

My next topic will be like...changing or fix and maybe expand some points that feels...awkward in this movie. Let's see here?

Geats x Revice feat Ryuki:
Revice part:
- Cut the scene introducing the movie's title at the beginning, Sakura doesn't henshin but fights 2 aliens; Reducing the flashback scene, the dialogue generally covers the introduction of the Igarashi family, defeating the enemy, and ending Revice; Choose the best scene where the family members together. Then move to the scene where the three siblings were about to take a photo, two aliens arrived. Ikki, Daiji, Sakura had Drivers ready, Hiromi came with a few Demon Troopers and gave Ikki Shin Ultimate Revice and failed. The scene where Ikki is at the center of the ghost will cut many scenes, keeping the beginning of the movie and then the hospital scene where he is there. When both sides fight, the scene will be like the movie but keep some unified scenes. Keeping the Blue Bird side, Hiromi from Revice lore fix is 60 instead of 50, but he is still good.

- When Ikki falls unconscious, the whole family and Blue Bird: Hiromi and Hikaru act as rearguards with Demon Troopers, Tamaki has Get Over Demons from the Battle Familia given by George to further research on the Juuga Driver. Genta joined the battle with everyone, Blue Bird sent most trusted persons to look after Yukimi.

- Delete the conversation between 2 aliens. The two aliens, loyal from the beginning to Colus, took Koshiro away when 6 Riders stopped them. (Evil henshin first then Evility). Both sides fight evenly without being overwhelmed like the movie, 6 Riders launching finishers only temporarily counteracts. The two aliens had enough of joking around and sucked out Koshiro's demon, using Koshiro as a hostage to threaten. Hiromi henshins with Hikaru and several Demon Troopers who cause chaos to save Koshiro but are defeated by two aliens. All had their henshin removed.

- While both sides fight, Ikki is like the movie but faster and more fierce. The voice will talk about the journey, strength and protection of all kinds, asking Ikki to choose a path. Ikki said to choose the bright path but took the dark path to have the strength to protect his family again. And at that moment Ikki shook hands with the voice that was Vice. That power caused Ikki to recover and teleport over. Ikki uses Vistamp and Vice back, uses Ultimate to hit the two aliens, everyone cheers (different execution, opening music plays here).

- Colus then took the opportunity to capture the demon Koshiro and even George. The three brothers chased and the rest stayed behind to prevent damage from Giff's Rift after being destroyed. And add the title of the movie:

Geats x Revice feat Ryuki: Movie Battle Royale
- It starts with the four people Ace, Keiwa, Neon and Michinaga and then meets Tsumuri just like the movie, completely cutting the first scene of the movie. Before Colus contacted the two aliens, he kidnapped Tsumuri and threatened Giori to give him the Desire Driver, imprisoning him. He then corrupted her and told her to invite players he personally selected: Seeker, Ouja, Knight, Ryuki. Ryuki disagrees and Ryuga appears imprisoned him, with Colus' hand in it. Knight planned to save Shinji. At first, he did not agree. After knowing Shinji's fate, he agreed and waited for the opportunity.

- After the Revice part, he saves 2 aliens before being destroyed, according to his agreement with the 2 aliens. From the beginning, the two aliens were very loyal, in fact, they pretended to wait for the opportunity to betrayed Colus and steal power from Giff. Seeing Giff's power destroy their homeland, they craved it, they would rebuild civilization like the strong lives the weak deads, then take a look at Desire Royale and Grand Prix.

- Colus knew this, he let this happen because he wanted to satisfy his desire for limitless violence, real blood, like ancient Roman gladiators. He sees this as enjoyment and he will do whatever it takes, causing enough conflict and betrayal to satisfy his asexual pleasure. After the two aliens complete their purposes, he will immediately kill them, because he knows that these two aliens, when he invites them, can threaten his game. And the two aliens know. Both were injured and had not yet recovered, allowing Colus to take advantage more easily.

- After that, as before, (Ikki did not use Ultimate), Live ambushed the truck and Tycoon launched a blind battle, creating an opportunity for Geats, Buffa and Na-Go to create a distraction with briefcases containing fake Koshiro. Tycoon fought Live then Evil, penetrated into Tycoon's demonic mind, both happy and scared, the two stopped fighting, chatting and about to go tell others, when Ryuga appeared to take them out (Geats, Na-Go, Buffa did not use Golden Fever). Then Geats used Fever to have Boost, then like the movie.

- Buffa, Na-Go, Vice, Jeanne will be the same, but Buffa interacts a lot with Vice. When Ouja fought, Vice tried to save him but it was too late, so he ran away. Jeanne and Na-Go will go to Ace and Ikki because Ace called urgently, the two talked and ate cake like moive then Knight appeared, the two girls henshined but Knight used Nasty Vent out. Knight will wait for the opportunity to turn the odds to save Shinji and join the good side.

- Ikki and Ace met, Ace figured it out, then like in the movie. Both of them explained more t about the concept of evil and the reason why Koshiro was kidnapped. Then 2 aliens appeared, Vice also arrived in time and both of them henshined into Ultimate, 2 aliens retreated to preserve their strength, Ace fought Ryuga, used Golden Fever Revice Buckle with Boost, surprising Ikki and Vice.

- By the time Ultimate Revice forced the two aliens to retreat and Ace fought back Ryuga, the movie-like wipe out scene was approaching and everyone retreated. Ace uses the fox motorcycle and Revice used the flying motorcycle to reach the destination. The scene after that is the same. And Seeker appeared. Ultimate Revice was originally in the battle, but Vice showed signs of disappearing so Ikki was a little behind, not as bad as the movie. Ace used Golden Fever + Magnum to get Beat and then Magnum Jackpot. 2 aliens came to cause trouble, so Ikki, Vice, and Ace retreated.

- Seeker here will be built as someone who wants to fulfill his father's wishes, but in reality he wants to aspire more, to become a great person, standing above his brothers, seeing himself as the only hope and factor, makes his family rise to the top, even his father will have to acknowledge him and treat him as an equal. He will use all my strength at all costs to reach his own peak, he is the only thing that brings his family up, EVEN uses FORCE.

- Ace saved Giori like in the movie, saying that Giori let two aliens surprise Colus, and then said that he and Riders would take care of those two. Giori gives Ikki and Vice Desire Driver. Ace gave Ikki Golden Fever so he could pick up Beat, and Monster gave to Vice. Ace also gave the Revice Buckle to Ikki and said to use it later to save his energy for the boss fight. Fierce battle like a movie.

- Seeker builds a tower right up to the rift, without participating in the fight. Giori kills Colus, and both aliens support him, because the time had come. Colus used his Vision Driver ability to suppress them, but the two aliens still retained Giff's power so they were able to withstand it. The 2 aliens told Giori that they would leave immediately, have nothing to do with it, and disappear into the rift, essentially taking advantage of Seeker's loophole to create a connection between him and the other two aliens to take over Giff's power, taking advantage of using Desire Royale as well. Ace's words, Giori decided to change the rules, whoever kill 2 aliens will win, many people can. And the Riders are back, fighting like the movie, Knight saves Shinji and Shinji seals Ryuga. (opening music Ryuki plays). Knight fights Ouja like a movie. Then everyone went to fight the boss. Live used Final to pick up Jeanne, and Geats Riders used Golden Fever to hit Propeller. Ryuki rides Advent? Ikki saved Vice in Vistamp like the movie.

- Ace, Ikki, Shinji and Seeker, the rest fight 2 aliens. Daiji and Sakura used Final, Tycoon, Na-Go and Buffa on Fever Jackpot to fight 2 aliens. Ryuki's Advent also contributed to the chaos of the two aliens. The whole fighting side was not overwhelmed, Ikki, Ace, especially Shinji said that true strength comes from the determination to not give up, not to abuse the power that is not yours. Seeker understood, he used willpower against the link, Ikki used the Revice Buckle and broke the link using Ultimate and change to basic, Ace used the basic form and Ryuki with his Advent weakening both aliens, Seeker was freed. Ryuki saved the demon Koshiro, then entrusted Daiji and Sakura, then all 4 Riders defeated the 2 aliens once and for all. Koshiro also contributed to the weakening because he has greater potential than his 3 brothers and could possess ALMOST the SAME power as Giff?

- The order is Ryuki, Revice with Vice and Geats. Seeker retired like in movie with Knight, Ouja, and Ryuki. Ryuki wished Ikki and Ace the best in life. Ouja was also a bit satisfied with this fun, not to the point of being inferior to the movie. Knight said that perhaps would meet again... But although Giff's Rift disappeared, it could have an impact, the remnants still lurking behind in deep darkness? (It has no effect on Geats, maybe only Revice)

- Ikki gave it to Ace. Through it, Ace also understood a lot about them and Vice, so he wrote a wish for Vice to live happily with Ikki and his family, Ace also wants to enjoy the feeling of family. It was supposed to be a wish that had some kind of error but somehow, it came true. After that everything was the same. Shinji told Keiwa that no matter how dangerous the demon's mind is or has to be sacrificed to protect peace, always believe in yourself and keep a clear head. Ikki and Ace eat sushi and take a bath at the Happy Spa, fraternal style. Vice lives in Ikki like Lovekov or Kagerou, but Ikki doesn't realize yet, one day the two will meet again...

Post credit: Giori noticed that the wish was not supposed to be granted, who would have thought, a secret hint for the God Ace arc and the reincarnation period. During the whole process, Niram knew ALL the events, he wanted to see a good drama and calculated a beneficial and safe path for the new Grand Prix... It was all for the satisfaction of understanding reality. He took the opportunity to fire Giori and let Ace continue participating to monitor Ace and because this event increased security...

NOTE: I also do a "Special Edition" for this movie, if there are some feedbacks on this, I may upload it here, who knows, it's up to you guys! Thanks for reading!

[DH21965]

NO WAY am I reading all of block of text.
Honestly, these “How I would pointlessly fix a series that is over and done with”
are useless wishing, if you have this much enthusiasm for Writing,
try doing something original and creatively your OWN.

THAT would be awesome sauce, new ideas and sources for inspiration.
Instead of “fixing” (????) and wasting your energy on something kinda pointless

[Darth Kalacius]

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Originally Posted by DH21965

NO WAY am I reading all of block of text.
Honestly, these ?How I would pointlessly fix a series that is over and done with?
are useless wishing, if you have this much enthusiasm for Writing,
try doing something original and creatively your OWN.

THAT would be awesome sauce, new ideas and sources for inspiration.
Instead of ?fixing? (????) and wasting your energy on something kinda pointless

To be fair, if I do that, it will no longer be the same, it's just the different sides of the coin, no more resemble of its original styles and feelings. And I'm sorry that I create Post too long, because it will explained things better, other than talking with no clear reasons.

There are others that want to fix or change everything, at least keep the spirits and potentials and even make everyone at least fleshed out their mind after watching main ones. They could think what should be done, it's not necessary to think it should be a main one. Just saving this from hell fire that's all.

Thanks for commenting, man. I have no hostile intentions. I'm not even a good writer on my own, at least all I can do now is change somethings to at least make it enjoyable. Fixing somethings is that even the main authors want to fix all the horrible things in the past to make it at least enjoyable.

Edit: In case someone ask why the thread is bad, it's my mistakes. But in truth, it's really bad... Damned...

[Sh Ranger]

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Originally Posted by Darth Kalacius

- Ikki gave it to Ace. Through it, Ace also understood a lot about them and Vice, so he wrote a wish for Vice to live happily with Ikki and his family, Ace also wants to enjoy the feeling of family. It was supposed to be a wish that had some kind of error but somehow, it came true.

This is good and so simple to imagine that Kinoshita must've been trying to do the wrong thing, like he always does. How absurd that Ace wasted the Desire Card to make Ikki remember Vice when he could've easily made a world where Vice lives instead. You'd think at least one of them, especially Vice, would've brought this up, huh.

Other than that, I think this movie would've been more tolerable as a standard 3-part Movie War: Revice -> Geats -> Crossover.

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Originally Posted by Darth Kalacius

I'm not even a good writer on my own

Let other people be the judge of that. Can hardly be worse than Kinoshita.

[Darth Kalacius]

Thanks man! I was plan to do the 3 parts but it's really hard to do that, beside we have Ryuki Riders coming to join the fun.

How do you think of my writing so far?

[Darth Kalacius]

Let's post the final part of series, this time it's the Special Edition of this Crossover.
Revice part:
- The beginning is few months after Finale and Final Stage. Cut the scene introducing the movie's title, Sakura doesn't fight two aliens; Reducing the flashback scene, the dialogue generally covers the introduction of Igarashi family, defeating the enemy, and Revice ending; Keep the best scenes where the family together. Blue Bird discovered it earlier. Right where the siblings were about to take a photo, 2 aliens arrived. Ikki, Daiji, Sakura had Drivers ready, Hiromi came with few Demon Troopers gave Ikki Shin Ultimate Revice and failed. Hiromi from Revice lore fixes is 60 instead of 50, but the picture is still fine.

- Ikki falls unconscious, the whole family with Blue Bird: Hiromi and Hikaru act as rearguards with Demon Troopers, Tamaki has got Get Over Demons from the Battle Familia by George to research more about the Juuga Driver. Genta joins to war, Blue Bird sends their closest confidant to watch over Yukimi. Delete the conversation between 2 aliens. Two aliens loyal to Colus tried to take Koshiro away but 6 Riders stopped him. (Evil henshin first then Evility).

- Both sides fought evenly without being overwhelmed like the movie, 6 Riders temporary counter them. The 2 aliens had enough of joking and sucked out Koshiro's evil spirit, using Koshiro as a hostage to threaten. Hiromi henshins with Hikaru who caused chaos to save Koshiro but failed. All had their henshin removed.

- While the two sides fight, the voice will talk about the journey, strength and ability, and ask Ikki to choose a path. Ikki said he chose the bright path but took the dark path of evil to have the strength to protect his family again, Ikki shook hands with that voice that was his demonic mind and Vice. Ikki recovers and teleports over, uses Vistamp and Vice returns, uses Ultimate, everyone cheers (another execution, opening song Revice plays).

- Colus then captured the baby demon and George. Surprisingly, he challenged everyone, summoning many Giff monsters and Mirror Monsters. Everyone henshins and attacks, Hikaru stays behind for backup. The Riders call the three brothers to go rescue the baby devil first and then they will chase after. And add to the trailer the title of the movie:

Geats x Revice feat Ryuki: Movie Battle Royale With All Riders

Note: This post is too long at this point so I will divided into 2 parts. The next parts will come out soon.

[Darth Kalacius]

- Starts with the Ace, Keiwa, Neon and Michinaga and then meets Tsumuri, cutting the first scene. Before Colus contacted the two aliens, he kidnapped Tsumuri and threatened Giori to give him the Vision Driver, imprison him. He corrupted her and told her to invite the players he selected: Seeker, Ouja, Knight, Ryuki. Ryuki disagrees and Ryuga appears imprisoned him, with Colus involved. Knight planned to save Shinji. At first, he didn't agree. Knowing that Shinji's fate, he agreed and waited for the opportunity. He saves 2 aliens before being destroyed, according to his agreement with them. They were very loyal, in fact, they pretended to wait for the opportunity to steal power from Giff. Seeing Giff's power destroy their homeland, they craved it, they would rebuild civilization like the strong kill the weak, then take a look at Desire Royale and Grand Prix. Colus knew this, he let this happen because he wanted to satisfy his desire for limitless violence, real blood. He sees this as enjoyment and he will do anything, causing enough conflict and betrayal to satisfy his asexual pleasure. After they complete their purpose, he will immediately kill them, because he know they can threaten his game. And the 2 knew that they were injured and had not yet recovered, making it easier for Colus to take advantage.

- Not only did the siblings (Ikki don't use Ultimate) chased the truck, but also many monsters caused chaos, all the Revice Riders hunted down and destroyed one after another. Because the monsters caused so much chaos on the road, the truck quickly escaped, and the Revice Riders took care of it. When the situation stabilized, they called siblings to rescue baby devil. After leaving, 2 aliens appear and the Riders are wiped out like the movie. Eliminated were Demons, Aguilera, Get Over Demons and Destream. Tycoon truck spreads smoke to distract for Geats Riders, fight Live then Evil, stop fighting, chat then Ryuga wipes out. Jeanne caught up with Na-Go and the two girls fought, discovered the fake basket, then the two of them talked about the situation, then Knight wipes out. Buffa and Vice interacted and then Ouja appeared, this time Buffa used Golden Fever to attack Ouja until he used Advent, Vice saved him because he sympathized with revived person, then both felt bad and ran away, making Ouja frustrated... Ace distracts Ikki using Golden Fever to pick up Boost and the racing scene is same. The two talked more about the event. While the group was fighting, many monsters came and caused chaos, causing the Riders to cooperate and gradually understand each other.

- 2 aliens disturbed and Vice and Buffa arrived in time. Buffa said he would help Ace just this once, there would be no next time, Ace knew this in advance. Ikki and Vice went to Ultimate to repel 2 aliens and Ace and Buffa fought back Ryuga and Ouja. Ouja calculated the debt with Ryuga, creating conditions for Ace and Buffa to cause trouble, plus the wipe out was approaching so they retreated. Ace used Golden Fever with Revice Buckle to pick up Boost, surprising Revice. Ace drove the fox motorcycle carrying Buffa and Revice drove the flying vehicle to the end. Seeker appears, drawing power from baby devil. Ultimate Revice was originally in the battle, but Vice showed signs of disappearing so Ikki was a bit outclassed, Ace used Golden Fever + Magnum to draw Ninja then Magnum Jackpot, Buffa used Golden Fever to draw Beat. 2 aliens came to cause trouble, so Ikki, Vice, Ace, and Michinaga retreated. Seeker will be built as a person who wants to fulfill his father's wishes, what he wants is to become a great person, standing above his brothers, seeing himself as the only hope and factor that makes the family go to the top, even his father had to acknowledge him and consider him an equal. He will use all his strength at any cost to reach his own peak, he is the only thing that brings his family up, INCLUDING FORCE. After he made his wish, he planned to kill Colus so that he wouldn't have a chance to take advantage of him in the future. Only his family and himself would control fates.

- Ace saved Giori , saying that Giori let 2 aliens surprise Colus, because he knew the real plan, and then said that he would take care of those 2. Giori gives Ikki and Vice Desire Driver. Ace gave Ikki Golden Fever so he could pick up Beat, and Monster gave Vice. Ace also gave the Revice Buckle to Ikki and said to use it later to save his energy for the boss fight. Rules and concepts of the final round of the game:

+ Riders who won the previous round will be divided into teams: Team A (Ace, Ikki, Vice and Michinaga), Team B (Ryuga, Knight, Ouja, Juuga, Colus should have chosen Seeker but he had a new idea so he chose George, because he did a commentary and saw that George seemed excited so he added it. George fought with the senior Riders which made him happy, plus Tsumuri was annoyed with him). As for the eliminated Riders, it turned out that they had been brainwashed so they were like Tsumuri, with cruel personalities. Team C (Demons, Aguilera, Get Over Demons, Destream), Team D (Tycoon, Live, Jeanne, Na-Go). The team's mission is to prevent Seeker from reaching Giff's Rift and absorbing the power. Meanwhile, teams must stop each other, even kill on the spot, there will be many monsters in the way. Whichever team can stop Seeker will kill each other until the last person wins. If Seeker absorbs power while killing many monsters blocking the way and destroy all Riders, he wins. The whole side was in heavy chaos, Buffa used Golden Fever on Ninja to cause chaos and then Jackpot, Ace used Command Twin Set Full Charge to cause chaos with Ikki and Vice support. Seeker builds a stronger defense tower. As Ace flew up, Ryuga used Advent to cause trouble, making it difficult. Plus, there were dense rows of monsters in the sky and earth, making it more chaotic.

- Knight suddenly used Nasty Vent, taking the opportunity to save Ryuki. Ryuki is saved and the two side with Ace. Ace, Ikki and Vice take care of the Revice Riders, Ryuki and Knight take care of the Ryuki Riders, and Buffa takes care of Tycoon and Na-Go. Ryuki was able to seal Ryuga and fight Ouja with Knight. Ikki, especially Vice, play around and cause trouble, and Juuga fights Get Over Demons. Destream is supported by Vail so he's free. Live thanks to Kagerou's stops Demons, which is about to be free. Tycoon uses Fever Jackpot to fight Buffa, which is also gradually becoming free. Jeanne and Aguilera are equal in strength, defeating monsters blocking their way, gradually becoming free thanks to their will. Na-Go used Fever Jackpot to rush into battle. Meanwhile, Ace, Ikki, and Vice fight many other monsters trying to get to the tower, and they all have similar interactions. And by the time Giori finished taking care of Colus with help from two aliens, everything was free. Knight stays behind to fight Ouja, the rest rush to the tower, destroying monsters blocking the way. Juuga, Get Over Demons, Aguilera, Destream are under the monster containment tower fight to make ways for Buffa, Tycoon and Na-Go picked up Propeller and then Jackpot, Live turned on Final with Jeanne, Demons went up to the tower to protect the main Riders; Geats, Ryuki, and Revice reach the top of the tower. Ryuki's Advent also contributes to distracting monsters.

- Giori kills Colus with 2 aliens supporting, the moment has come. Colus used his Vision Driver ability to suppress, but 2 aliens still had Giff's power, so they were able to withstand it. 2 aliens told Giori they would leave immediately, have nothing to do with it, and disappear into the rift, essentially taking advantage of Seeker's loophole to create a connection between Seeker and the two aliens to take over Giff's power from Seeker and Rift, taking advantage of Desire Royale. Before he died, Colus shouted that the bloody war would continue. Even if he died, at least he felt excited about the blood and violence. Giori changed the rules, whoever kills 2 aliens wins, many people can join. 2 aliens used the Seeker's combined power to summon countless Giff monsters that spread across all sides of the tower. Ikki saves Vice at Vistamp. All monsters are spreading almost infinitely from the 2 aliens. Seeker tried to resist the connection but to no avail.

- Ryuki fights more aggressively, creating an opportunity for Ace and Ikki to launch a surprise attack on the two aliens. Ikki, Ace, and especially Shinji said that true strength comes from the determination to not give up, not to abuse strength that is not yours. Ace and Shinji created a distraction long enough, Seeker understood, he used willpower against the link, Ikki used Revice Buckle like the movie, went to Ultimate to break the link, weakening the two aliens and the Rift, Ace freed Seeker, Ryuki saved the evil, then sent to Daiji and Sakura, Seeker to Demons, Ace and Revice used basic form then 4 Riders defeated 2 aliens once and for all. Demon Koshiro contributes to the weakness because he has greater potential than his 3 brothers and can possess ALMOST SAME power as Giff? (Geats opening music plays). The order is Ryuki, Revice with Vice and Geats. Seeker retired like movie with Knight, Ouja, Ryuki. Ryuki wished Ikki and Ace well. Ouja was a little satisfied with the fun this time, not to the point of being inferior to the movie, Knight said he would meet again... Giff's Rift disappeared, but it could have an impact, the remnants were still hiding behind the deep darkness... (It doesn't have any effect on Geats, maybe only Revice). Both the Revice Riders and Geats Riders were chatting happily with each other, but Buffa was cold as ever...

- Ikki gave it up to Ace. Through that, Ace learned a lot about Ikki, his family, friends and Vice, so he wrote a wish for Vice to live happily with Ikki and his family. Ace also wants to enjoy the warm feeling. It was supposed to be a wish that had some kind of error but somehow, it came true. After that everything was the same. Shinji told Keiwa that no matter how dangerous the demon's mind is or has to be sacrificed to protect peace, always believe in yourself and keep a clear head. Ikki and Ace eat sushi and take a bath at the Happy Spa, fraternal style. Vice lives in Ikki like Lovekov or Kagerou, but Ikki doesn't realize yet, one day the two will meet again... (Neon, Sakura and Aguilera bath together).

- Post credit: Giori notes that the wish was not supposed to be granted, secretly hinting at the God Ace arc and reincarnation. During the whole process, Niram knew ALL the events, he wanted to see good drama and calculated a profitable and safe route for the new Grand Prix... It was all for the satisfaction of understanding reality. He plans to fire Giori and let Ace joins to calculate his next move...

[Darth Kalacius]

Damn... It's been a while since I do this, so few feedbacks. No offenses, but I kinda feel lonely... In the far future maybe, I may come across Saber...