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01-21-2013, 06:49 PM | #1 |
KinGold
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hello this is my first atempt at fan fiction so Im a little nerves. I trying to do a robot themed sentai but there is still there is a lot I am working on with it. but I did wrote out an opening scene for it. plese read it and tell me what you think and I will get back to you guys with more of my ideas
Mecharanger first takes place off earth on a distant plant filled with giant (Megazord size) robots, and on that plant a fight is going with a team of seven Sentai looking mecha fighting an unknown foe. As the fight progresses the pink, yellow, blue, and green mechs go down one after another leaving the red, bronze, and gray mechs still fighting. The bronze mech suddenly disappears and reappears a moment latter holding forur pink, yellow, blue, and green hexagonal components only to be shot down after handing them to the gray mech. The red mech then bends down to the bronze mech and takes out a bronze component similar to the ones that the bronze mech retrieved in the first place. After getting the component the last two remaining mechs retreated to a nearby shelter as the gray mech started to work on a computer next to a giant arc like devise in the same building as them. As a portal opens inside the arc the buildings wall is blown down only to show a silt house of another mech with a giant hook. The new mech raises its’ hook arm and the red mech begins to be crushed. The gray mech tries to shoot down the attacker only to be block by another bulkier mech. As the red mech is being crushed he yells to the gray mech “GET GOING NOW! THAT”S AN ORDER!” then the red mechs reaches into his chest and pulls out another hexagonal component that was red and had the number one on it and throws it to the gray mech. The gray mech then stands there looking at the red mech as it powers down until a purple mech starts to come after him. He runs to the portal desperately avoiding the other mech fire. Once he got completely through the portal it closed. The gray mech reappears on earth in a forest towering over the trees. The mech looks into the sky, scanning the satellites. Then it starts to mess with a devise on its right arm until it began to shrink and then it turns in to a human male.
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01-21-2013, 09:16 PM | #2 |
「蝙蝠騎士の魔界<ブラム>」
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It's an interesting concept to say the least. It's very reminiscent of Transformers, Animorphs, and another series that I can't recall the name of right now. But, that isn't a bad thing. It does sound like it would be an interesting series, and it has my curiosity turned on. So I'd enjoy seeing more of it.
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01-21-2013, 09:52 PM | #3 |
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It's a solid idea, I'll give you that. Kinda reminds me of Jetman's beginning.
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01-21-2013, 09:58 PM | #4 |
Gathering Rangers for D&D
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Need help with designs let me known.
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01-22-2013, 08:25 AM | #5 |
KinGold
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Thank you for the complaments, and I will add more later to day if I can get to it
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It's an interesting concept to say the least. It's very reminiscent of Transformers, Animorphs, and another series that I can't recall the name of right now. But, that isn't a bad thing. It does sound like it would be an interesting series, and it has my curiosity turned on. So I'd enjoy seeing more of it.
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01-22-2013, 11:26 AM | #6 |
「蝙蝠騎士の魔界<ブラム>」
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I see. Well regardless, I'm still interested in reading some more of it.
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01-22-2013, 07:55 PM | #7 |
KinGold
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Okay onto why the gray mech is on earth. Basically he was part of a robotic Sentai team on his world, but they were losing. The team gets info from the bronze on invasion plans for earth, which leads the team to decide to get there first so they can defend it so earth does not end up like their home. The gray mech then works on a portal to transport the team to earth ahead of the villains and set up defenses on earth. The team had to find the exact position of earth before they can go, which leads to the events of the opening scene. The colored hexagonal components that were taken from each mech before they were destroyed were sort of like their brains (let’s call them Power Cores for now) so none of the mechs died, just bodiless. Now on earth the gray mech finds out that the people of the planet have a compatible energy signature (kind of like from RPM) with his kind so he then works on away to adapt the Power Cores to the humans thus creating morphers. Now he just needs to find the right humans to match up with the members of the team. Next time I will talk about more of the members of the humen team and talk about powers weapons and design.
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08-18-2013, 09:34 PM | #8 |
KinGold
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Okay it has been a while but I’ve got a list of Ranger colors, powers, what part are their mech, personal weapons, other
0. White, he is able to go in to cyber space, head, none, needed to combine the mech 1. Red, Fire, torso, sword, Hot headed leader 2. Blue, Sight, right arm, Riffle ,cool headed sniper 3. Green, Strength, right leg, Hammer ,headstrong brawler 4. Yellow, electric, left leg, Tonfa/ bow staff, high energy marshal artist 5. Pink, Shield, left arm, shield, strong willed defender 6. Bronze, Teleportation ,torso/ backpack weapons set, Battle axe/ command knife, Battle ready commando a. He comes to the team later like all sixth rangers. In mech mode he has a big rig that forms Bronze’s limbs and head 7. Orange, Swordsmen skills better than reds, Twin Swords/ Sword arm, twin swords , Grandmaster swordsman a. Orange was under mind control and when freed he acts as a mentor to the team and only acts when they need him (Robot ) 8. Indigo, Flight, Jet and extra weapons for main Robo, Bow gun, Sky high Warrior a. Usually patrols the Earth from above and come down when needed(Robot ) 9. Gray, Intelligent, Duel guns/ Gun arm/ turret, pistol, Ingenious walking artillery a. Acts as mentor sort of, gives the team their gear but is usually held up in his lab working on something, gets vary in to his work and forgets everything while working(Robot ) 10. Black, Combines all the mechs together and is a bad @$$ knight, He is the size of the main Robos and becomes armor for them, Sword and Shield, The Invincible Black Knight a. He is a sword/ mecha core that anyone can use in ranger mode and takes them over and becomes armor over them then detaches and grows to his Mech form 11. Purple, Has the powers of 0-9, Torso/ arm/ leg, Sword gun, Unstable fighter a. He loves to fight and toy with the rangers and humans(Robot and evil ) 12. Silver, Sealing powers, arm, Mini mini-gun, Unbreakable Sealer a. He hold with in him Mecharanger infinity who is gold unstable and turns into a sword and Silver forms armor him(Robot evil) 13. Crimson, Gravity, Torso and leg combo, Hook/ gravity cannon, Sovereign of Doom a. He leads the enemies after turning on the others with Silver and purple and by the means of the science advisers from the last evil ruler and purple copying Gray’s power they revive old enemies of the last team and sends them to earth That’s it for the characters I suck at names so if any one has any good Ideas shoot.
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