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01-21-2013, 10:17 PM | #1 |
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"The stars align, the warriors clash! Ken tōshi Sentai Starranger!"
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In the year 2013, an evil from another universe invades the milky way, looking to conquer and destroy the galaxy. However, with the help of the Enix Observations and Technology Corporation, five teenagers will harness the powers of the constellations Phoenix, Musca, Crux, Carina, and Grus, as well as the ancient gladiators to combat the evil army. These teenagers will become Ken tōshi Sentai Starrangers!
The fate of Earth, our galaxy, and the universe are in the balance. And the war, is about to begin! Xorpeon Mecha Ion Warrior Opening Theme I Am A Hero by Stereopony Insert/Ad Break Music Closing Theme Harukaze by Scandal *Artwork by guncannon109, Kagezuno, and XW1n5t0nX* *Written by XW1n5t0nX* *All music is copyrighted and owned by their respective owners* *Ken tōshi is the Japanese word for gladiator*
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01-21-2013, 10:27 PM | #2 |
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Good to see they fit the story.
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01-21-2013, 10:55 PM | #3 |
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That was the idea. I think all of my creations, whether they be this, my music, anything meticulously to where it fits.
Also, both the opening and ending themes have been added.
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Cool, I like both.
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01-31-2013, 05:35 PM | #5 |
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For millions of years, the universe and all of the galaxies have been illuminated by the stars. These stars have provided a shining light of hope and salvation for many, and have also been inspiration for a Milena of mythology and folklore.
And for the length of time that the stars have been around, so have fearsome warriors. From the mighty cavemen, to Spartans, gladiators, to today's modern day soldiers. Warriors have been around to cause evil, and to protect what they care for. Ken tōshi Sentai StarRanger! *Opening video and theme* Episode One: Star Birth The cold darkness of the space within the Milky Way galaxy sits in it's usual and harmony like way. The planets rotating around the sun, billions of stars dying, being birthed, and shining like a billboard. The sun, a blazing mega start sitting in the middle of all of this. It truly is a peaceful place. On the outside of the galaxy however, a giant spaceship, in the shape an arrow with bug like wings is flying across space, it on a one way course towards the doorway of the milky galaxy. Surrounding this giant bug like spaceship are soldier like aircraft, each in the form of a double bladed axehead. Inside this warship like craft's main bridge and briefing room, sits Lord Xorpeon, commander of the Xespian Army and ruler of this, his ship in his throne. His right hand gripping his staff that is that of a scythe. it's top decorated with multiple blades in a row, each one in the traditional scythe blade shape, each one sporting teeth like a saw. His left hand lays across the left arm of his throne. He lifts his head, hearing the door to this room opening. "Greetings Lord Xorpeon." Sillite, second to Zorpeon, and a high ranking sergeant and warrior within the Xespian Army says, as he walks into the bridge. Sillite's appearance is that of a humanoid like shark, his head in the shape of a regular human head, it sporting three horn like fins at the top. "Greetings Sillite. What is it that you need?" Xorpeon spits back in return. "We are approximately thirty minutes away from entering the Milky Galaxy." "Excellent. And what planets feature life? It wouldn't be fun to conquer a galaxy without any living beings on it to crush." Xorpeon questions, his gaze dead set on his second hand man. "Our scientists and scouts have reported that there is life within the galaxy. Most of it is nothing more then plant life, and tiny creatures such as insects and bacteria." Sillite states. "I see..." Xorpeon says cool like, drumming the fingers of his left hand along the arm of his throne, he soon returning to talking. "...You said most. What of this other life that this putrid place holds?" "There is a planet named Earth. It houses a very large amount of life. We have noted that it contains animals, plant life, bacteria, as well as humans." "Humans you say?" Xorpeon says in an inquiring fashion. "Yes, humans. The whole planet is filled with them. Reports say that the number is well into the billions. Only Earth houses human life, and that much amount of life period within the galaxy." Sillite explains to his commander. "I see." Xorpeon stands up, and walks over to a window, letting him watch the space that his ship is moving through, Sillite still standing near the door. "Sillite, our master has sent us to conquer as much of the galaxy as needed as he takes care of our home world within the Neutronian dimension. And let's be frank, this universe has not featured that much of a challenge. Yes, there were a few planets that fought back, but they all fell easily. But this galaxy sounds like it would be fun to take over. That much life must mean that there is a great deal of people ready to fight for it's safety. Which means crushing it will be very enjoyable, even orgasmic you might say. Sillite." "Yes my lord?" "I want our troops on every planet this galaxy has, but I want this ship headed for this planet known as Earth. It is my main goal as of now. Is that understood?" "Yes sir." Sillite nods his head in response with his verbal come back. "Good. You are dismissed until you are needed." "Yes sir. Hail Xespia!" Sillite bows before he exits the room. Xorpeon continues to stare out of the window even after Sillite leaves, he clutching his staff tighter, he laughing softly. Meanwhile on Earth, an alarm goes off in an observatory on the North Eastern edge of Tokyo Japan. The observatories workers rush to see what has caused the alarm to go off. As the main computer lab of the observatory looks into the trigger, Doctor Joe Nakamusa walks in, pushing his glasses up his face some before they fall off. "What seems to be the problem Dr. Mutoh?" Nakamusa asks. "It appears that there is a great amount of energy being forced against the outer edges of our galaxy. It appears that something is trying to break through almost." Dr. Mutoh explains, looking up from a small computer screen to make eye contact with Nakamusa. "I see." Nakamusa replies, scratching his head some. "Doctors, look at the main screen!" A scientists shouts out, causing Doctors Nakamusa and Muto, as well as everybody else in the room to look at a giant wall screen. As they look at the screen, which is looking at a random point of space, red and purple lightning starts to flash rapidly, green blasts of what appear to be energy shootout, the space around this area spirals, almost forming a type of blackhole. Doctor Nakamusa stares in stunned silence, his eyes wide, jaw almost dropped as a giant space ship passes into the Milky Way, smaller ships flying to the sides of it. "Good lord...it's them..." Dr. Nakamusa says, almost in a whisper like tone. "Who is them Joe?" Dr. Mutoh asks, looking at his friend and fellow colleguage, a worried look painted across his face. "It's the army that we were warned about in that videograph from the Andromeda Galaxy a few months ago." "A are you sure?" "I am most definitely sure. Dr. Shinrai." Dr. Nakamusa says, looking towards one of the female scientists. "Yes sir?" Dr. Shinrai replies. "It is time. Please bring me the files, the "box" quickly." "Hai! Anything else?" "Yes, contact and bring the selected here." Nakamusa says. "As you wish." Dr. Shinrai stands up and bows to Dr. Nakamusa, running out of the room. "Are you sure we need to bring them in Joe?" Dr. Mutoh inquires his friend. "I am positive, we may not have any other options." At Takami High School in the South Western part of Tokyo, the school day is over, a cool Spring breeze running through out the area, cheery blossoms beginning to bloom. The students walk, some even run out of the school, off to do their activities away from learning. Ayu Yukishiro, her sister Sora, and Hiko Kasai all walk with each other out of the school and down a path, leading them outside of the school's area and into a shopping district. "Muhheghh that was a pretty rough day. I had to take tests in all of my classes." Ayu says as she yawns, stretching her arms over her head. "Ayu you had it easy. I ended up having to take over teaching duties for a few of my classes. The teachers either didn't show up, and the substitutes were complete bakas." Hiko says, he closing his eyes and brushing some of his hair back. "Oh Hiko, you poor little thing. Let your best buddy Ayu make it all better." Ayu giggles softly, throwing her arms around Hiko's neck, pressings her lips to his cheek for a friendly kiss. "Sora, how was your day?" Ayu pulls away from her male friend, looking over to her sister. "Oh the usual, I went to two, got bored of everybody and left to sleep on the track." She replies, almost coldly, keeping her gaze on their path. "Sora, you really should stay in your classes and not skip as much. I've seen your work, and you're very smart. If you just keep it up and study and participate more, you'd be at the top like your sister and I." Hiko explains to Sora, attempting to get through her thick head. "Whatever." Sora spits right back out. "Oh hush you two. Come on, I'll buy us all some ice cream." Ayu squeaks out, attempting to stop a possible fight from happening. Sora and Hiko shrug in agreement, bringing a smile to Ayu's face. The trio continue walking down the sidewalk, they continuing their voyage to get a little after school treat. All of a sudden, a black car comes speeding down the road, breaking, and coming to a squeaking halt in to the group of friend's side. The right passenger door open, Dr. Shinrai getting out, walking until she is standing in front of the three. "Hiko Kasai, Ayu Yukishiro, and Sora Yukishiro?" Dr. Shinrai asks the group, staring at them through her glasses. "Hai. Hai. Hai?" All three teens respond. "Please come with me immediately, it is urgent." The three friends look back and forth at each other, to the car, and to the woman dressed in a lab coat standing in front of them. They all shuffle into the car, almost reluctantly. Dr. Shinrai climbs in after them, and shuts the passenger door. The black car then speeds off. *Commercial break* ----------------------------------------------------------------------- *End of Commercial Break* Dr. Shinrai leads Hiko, Ayu, and Sora into the main computer screening room. She then takes a stand to the side as Dr. Nakamusa and Dr. Mutoh walk up to the teenagers, standing in front of them. "Knochi wa to the three of you." Dr. Nakamusa says in a greeting manner. "My name is Doctor Nakamusa. These are my assistants Doctor Mutoh, and Doctor Shinrai." The three scientists, and the three friends bow respectively to each other, Hiko, Ayu, and Sora showing some restraint at first before doing so. "Konochi wa Nakamusa-san. May I ask why we are here?" Hiko speaks softly, being respectful to his elder. "Let me explain Hiko." Dr. Nakamusa replies. "You know my name?" "I know all of your names. I would considering I picked you three." "Picked us for what?" Ayu questions, taking a light hold of her sister's school jacket sleeve. "Yeah, why exactly did you kidnap us?" Sora barks out, she egtting her mouth covered almost immediately by Hiko and Ayu before she can say anything else. "I apologize for my sister's rudeness." Ayu squeaks out. "It is alright Miss Yukishiro. And we didn't kidnap you considering you came of your own free will." Dr. Nakamusa says, straightening his tie a little. "Anyways, I suppose I should explain myself. I picked you three to participate in a project that we here at the observatory are now beginning to operate." "What is the project?" Hiko asks respectfully unlike that of one of his companions. Dr. Nakamusa looks over to both Dr. Mutoh and Shinrai before turning to face the children. He takes a deep breath, and releases a sigh. "For years now, we have studied space. And as technology has advanced and improved greatly, we've gained the ability to actually communicate with galaxies outside of our own. It's give us insight on to how space is outside of our little territory, and search for possible future planets that we can live on. Three months ago however, we received an urgent message from the Andromeda Galaxy. They were under attack from an army from what they said was either a newly made galaxy, or another dimension entirely. They told us to be careful and stay on alert of any unusual activity within our galaxy. They also told us the name of this army. The Xespian Army. Well, at around 1:43 this afternoon, we spotted the Xespians breaking into the Milky Way Galaxy, obvious our galaxy. After we saw this, I instructed Dr. Shinrai to gather the five of you up." "Five us? Sir I would never go against a scientist or doctor, but there's only three of us." Ayu noted, pointing to herself, her sister, and Hiko. Dr. Nakamusa chuckled a little. He then turned towards Dr. Shinrai, and made a waving motion with his hand. She nodded, and pressed a button on a wall console, a door on the right side of the group of teenagers opening. Through the door walked out another teenager, he dressed in casual clothing, he blowing some hair out of his face, his hands deep in his short pockets. He walked over, standing to the side of the group. "This is Ryuji Enishi. He is one of the top students within Japan's homeschooling system." Dr. Nakamusa explained. "Konochi wa." Ryuji spoked in a soft manner, he bowing towards the doctors and Hiko, Ayu, and Sora, they nodding their heads in return. His gaze would only return to Dr. Nakamusa after looking at the three for a minute, nodding a little to Ayu. "Okay, that explains four, but what of five?" Sora questioned. "Well..." Dr. Nakamusa started. Before he could finish, another door opened, a teenager with semi long hair walking in, dressed in Hiko and company's school uniform, he yawning a little. "Kazu?" Ayu asked, staring almost dumbstruck towards her classmate. "Oh, konochi wa Ayu-chan. Oh, and hey Hiko, Sora." Kazu greeted. He then turned towards Ryuji, scratching his head a little. "Oh, hey person I don't know." "This is my nephew, Kazuki Sanouske." Dr. Nakamusa explained, sighing at his nephew's informal greeting towards one of his guests. "So Uncle Joe, why exactly did you drag me away from the arcade to this place?" Kazu asked, a clueless expression on his face. "Hai, please tell us Dr. Nakamusa." Ayu said, in what sounded like a begging tone. "Alright. I have chosen all of you to help us combat the Xespian Army." Dr. Nakamusa explained. The five teenagers stood there in silence, Kazu then beginning to laugh wildly. "AHAHAHAHA That's a good one Uncle Joe. So w.." "SILENCE!" Dr. Nakamusa yelled. Kazu blinked in astonishment, he hiding behind Sora. "Protct me Sora-chan, you're big and strong." "Bugg off Kazu." Sora shot back, pushing him to where he stood in between her and Hiko. "If I may continue. You see, we don't just study the stars and space. We also assist the Japanese government with it's military equipment, as well as the equipment for a few other countries. For some time now, we've had the technology to give people great power to help them in battle. We have been saving it for a very dire situation, and this is certainly dire. Dr. Mutoh." Dr. Mutoh nodded. He then walked over to the five teenagers, he holding a small black and silver box case. He undid a lock on the front of the case before opening it, revealing five bracelets. "These are what we've called Star-Graphers. You use them to harness and gain the power which I spoke of. There is one for each of you. Please take them, as you will need them." Dr. Nakamusa recited to the five of them. The group looked back and forth at each other. Ryuji would then speak up. "But why us? Shouldn't these be given to the Japanese army?" "We thought of that. We even tried something along those lines at once, but it did not work well. We came to the decision that it would be best to give it to a younger group, and you five were who we picked." "But, why us exactly?" Hiko question. "Because of all that you offer. Hiko, Ayu, you two are at the top of your grade, and of your schools class. You two have earned a great deal of awards and promising futures for that. That is why you two were chosen. Ryuji, like Hiko and Ayu, you are at the top in your education. You also have a great knowledge of technology, and would be able to assist them within any problems they have with equipment." Dr. Nakamusa explained. "What about me?" Sora asked, this time a little more polite. "Ah, Sora-chan. While you're recent grades for the last few years aren't the best, we are aware of how well you tested on an I.Q. test when you started high school. So while you don't always use you're potential, it can still be of great use." "Heh, so that means I'm pretty smart too eh?" Kazu asked, he closing his eyes, a smile forming across his mouth. "No, not really. You're grades would be an insult to even that of a first grader. I picked you because of how well you do in martial arts. You're the group's brawn." Dr. Nakamusa said bluntly. Kazu frowned, crossing his arms. "Well why should we help you anyways? We're teenagers. We have priorities." "I don't think wasting your time at an arcade and ramen house are good priorities Kazu." Ayu snickered, giggling some. "I know this all seems odd, and sudden. But we all picked you because of what I just said. Please, do not do this for me, do this for Japan, and for all of Earth. Even do it for the galaxy that is at risk. Please become StarRangers, I beg you." Right then, the ground started to shake violently, everybody grabbing onto something. Ayu began to fall, however Ryuji caught her, and brought her back up. "Sir, the screen!" A scientist yelled. Everybody turned to the main screen, Xespian foot soldiers, all in the form of humanoid scorpions were running amuck down in Tokyo. They attacking the civilians, and destroying anything they could find. Xespian soldier air craft would be flying through the air, shooting at anything in sight. Dr. Nakamusa looked towards the five teenagers, Dr. Mutoh looking at Dr. Nakamusa, Dr. Shinrai looking at everybody. The teenagers then all looked to each other, their gazes then returning to the five Star-Graphers. *Commercial Break* ----------------------------------------------------------------------- *End of Commercial Break* In the center of Western Tokyo, Xespian soldiers, known as Fangos run around, attacking anybody, and anything they see in sight. Xespian battle ships flying in the sky, shooting at the buildings of the city. Tokyo police try their hardest to fight against these unknown enemies, but end up having to fall back. A young girl cries as she bunkers down against a wall, a Fango standing over her, making a chuckling like noise in an insectoid language. The creature raises it's arm, and goes to bring it down, looking to kill the girl. But the creature is stopped, a foot slamming into the side of it's head, sending it rolling away. The girl looks up, Kazu standing their huffing a little bit. "Get to safety little one." Kazu says, looking down towards the young one, giving her a warm smile. The girl smiles and nods in return, she running off. Kazu then lets out that of a battle cry, he rushing towards a group of Fangos, he starting to fight them off, using various kicks and strikes that are represented by Jet Kun Do. He ducks down as a soldier goes to slash at his head, he ramming his elbow in to it's mid section. Kazu then performing a break dance like spin, he kicking the soldiers back a few feet, he jumping to his feet as well. Off a little bit, the other four are engaging in combat as well. Sora fights back against the Fangos, she using her skills of a street fighter to send them down. She is suddenly grabbed from behind by two of the creatures, a third going in for a blow. However she flips up, the Fango slashing into his two fellow soldiers as she lands behind where they stood. She then smirked, giving the Fango a kick straight to the throat shades of Shawn Michaels. Hiko and Ayu fight for themselves as well, they however not having the same amount of success as Kazu and Sora are. In the middle of this brawl, Ryuji continuously ducks down and to the side to avoid being hit. He only striking when the moment is right. The five teenagers fight bravely, but they soon start to get overrun. The Fangos then run to stand in line in front of the five. They then raise, and point their weapons, fang blades equiped with a blaster to the teenagers. They pull the trigger, blasting all five kids back against a pile of cars. The group lays on the ground, clutching at themselves in pain from the blast. All of them sporting burn marks, bruises, and cuts. However, Kazu and Ayu make it to their feet first. "I don't know about the rest of you, but I'm not going to let some bugs beat me." Kazu states loudly, almost yelling it towards his comrades and their enemies. "Kazu's right guys. We can't die, everybody is depending on us to win." Ayu shouts in response to Kazu's statement. the two looking at each other and nodding. Hiko, Sora, and Ryuji work their way up to their feet, standing in line with Ayu and Kazu. All five of them exchange glances before reaching into their pockets, pulling out their respective Star-Graphers. They look at each other again before strapping them onto their left wrists. Lights go off on the bracelets, shining in the colors of red, green, black, yellow, and purple. "I'm happy to see that you all are now going to work with us. Arigato, arigato!" Dr. Nakamusa's voice comes out from Ayu's bracelet. "As you said, we we're chosen, it's our duty to protect Japan." Hiko responds. "Mhm. Now morph." Nakamusa requests. "We would, but uh, how do we do that exactly?" Kazu asks, laughing some as the others nod their heads some in agreement. A sigh can be heard from Dr. Nakamusa. "There's a button on the front of the Grapher. Hit it." The teens shrug and do as they are told, a blue circle near the top and front of the morpher flashing after they do so. "Now turn that golden dial and the constellation you are represented by will pop up. Once again, they all do as told. They each turn their dials, a star constellation popping up for each of them? "Phoenix?" Kazu notes. "Gruss?" Ayu questions. "Carina?" Hiko ponders. "Musca..." Sora says, almost disappointingly. "Cruxx, hmm" Ryuji says. "Now hit the button again, say 'Gladiator Star Allign!', and you will morph." Dr. Nakamusa explains. The five teenagers smirk some. They raise their arms into an upright position. "GLADIATOR STAR, ALIGN!" The five shout, pressing their buttons. *Cue instrumental of opening* In a purplish blue space surrounding, each of the teenagers fly up, their respectful constellations coming alive, and flowing over them. This form that of their suits which now cover their body. A chariot, each sporting five stars then charges through each of their heads, forming their helmets. Once back in the plane of their normal living, they stand in line, each in their suits. "This is awesome!" Kazu exclaims. "I've never felt this much power." Ryuji states. Back at the observatory, Dr. Nakamusa wipes his eyes as Dr. Mutoh and Shinrai smile softly. "You five have now taken on the power of not only the stars and the constellations, but of the ancient Gladiators. You five are now, Ken tōshi Sentai StarRangers!" To Be Continued... *Closing video and theme*
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01-31-2013, 05:47 PM | #6 |
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Nice OP and ED. I'd like to see what you pick for insert songs.
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01-31-2013, 06:24 PM | #7 |
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Nice start, I'm already liking Sora's "I don't give a fuck" attitude. Also Xorpeon shows promise of being a great villain. Kind of wondering where Kazu and Ryuji are though.
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01-31-2013, 06:35 PM | #8 |
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They're coming. And guys remember, that's just the first half of the first episode. There's still more to it.
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02-01-2013, 03:40 PM | #9 |
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Episode one is now fully up! I hope you all enjoy it!
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Nice start to the series. Love how you're giving voice to the characters, again Sora might be my favorite already. I personally feel that the use of Japanese words feels just a little awkward, it just doesn't seem natural to me. Also when writing a story of any kind, it helps to keep things in past tense when describing what's happening.
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"We would, but uh, how do we do that exactly?" Kazu asks, laughing some as the others nod their heads some in agreement.
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"We would, but uh, how do we do that exactly?" Kazu asked laughing some as the others nodded their heads some in agreement.
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