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01-29-2021, 03:30 PM | #11 |
Yodonna oshi
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And with Her Came the Birds
Mashin Sentai Kiramager, Kamen Rider Saber Standing by the coffee machine, waiting for her chai tea latte, Sudo Mei has some doubts about one of the new members of staff working in her office. |
01-30-2021, 05:53 PM | #12 |
Yodonna oshi
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There Will Come Soft Rains
Ultraman Saga Within the cockpit of her U Loader, the silent city below her, Anna asks herself what the future holds, now the streets are empty. |
01-31-2021, 03:53 AM | #13 |
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There Will Come Soft Rains
Ultraman Saga Within the cockpit of her U Loader, the silent city below her, Anna asks herself what the future holds, now the streets are empty. |
01-31-2021, 06:04 AM | #14 |
Yodonna oshi
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Hahahah! I assure you that was not authorial intent.
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01-31-2021, 07:04 AM | #15 |
Reiei
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So, I may or may not have checked out the Kiramager/Saber ones. I just have one question, though.
When you make longer ones? These short stories are great, but in the end it just leaves me wanting for more. These are really good, but if I could hnn "stretch for minor nitpicks" here, Mei would be the type to voice her concerns instead of sitting and thinking of it. Such as the scene where Mei saw a guy being ecstatic of seeing the wonder world and she remarked, loudly, "what a weird guy!". Just a stupidly minor detail. |
01-31-2021, 09:33 AM | #16 |
Yodonna oshi
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These are really good, but if I could hnn "stretch for minor nitpicks" here, Mei would be the type to voice her concerns instead of sitting and thinking of it. Such as the scene where Mei saw a guy being ecstatic of seeing the wonder world and she remarked, loudly, "what a weird guy!".
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01-31-2021, 03:32 PM | #17 |
Yodonna oshi
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Destructive Infinity
Kamen Rider Saber, Kamen Rider Den-o Watching the battle unfold below, aged Désast finds himself confronted by an old friend. |
02-05-2021, 03:30 PM | #18 |
Yodonna oshi
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Mentally Blind
Mashin Sentai Kiramager, Kamen Rider Saber Continuing her search for those who claim dark energy not in the Emperor's name, but for their own cause, Yodonna finds herself unwittingly confronted by Sudo Mei once more. |
02-05-2021, 06:50 PM | #19 |
Reiei
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Something tells me the Saber short stories, especially Yodonna's are all inter connected.
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02-05-2021, 07:04 PM | #20 |
Yodonna oshi
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Thank you for taking the time to read this, by the way. I know what I write is off-kilter and not the usual stuff that people want to read, so I appreciate you humouring me laser-focusing on these small details. |
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