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My series I made years ago is now a fan fic! Artwork can still be seen in the fan art section, but here is the first episode (all episodes are labeled as "Story)
Yume Sentai Mythonger Story 1: I'm a Dreamer! A plane, descending onto a runway at the Tokyo airport. Among the passengers, a young man in his late teens was dressed in tattered red clothing. A flight attendant approached him and nudged his shoulder gently. “Sir, we’ve arrived now, you might wanna wake up n-” “HOLD ON A SEC!!!” he shouted, bolting out of his seat. Looking around, he saw that all the other passengers were watching him. “Uh...hehehe...sorry, I was just having this awesome dream and didn’t wanna get interrupted...I...I’ll just get off the plane now,” he said, grabbing his bag and running out. “What’s his deal?” the flight attendant asked another. “You don’t know?” “Huh?” “He’s a reported archeological genius! He just came back from a trip to South America.” “SERIOUSLY?! THAT GUY?!” “Yeah, he was all over the news! I think his name was-” ___ Within the airport, the young man slammed his bag onto the ground as he sat against a wall. “Man, the dream was just getting good...Hmm...since I’m back home, I might as well call somebody.” Looking through his phone, he circulated through the names until he found one that made him smile. As it rang, he looked around and saw more people staring at him. “Hello?” The young man put his phone up to his ear. “I’m home now, Tomomi.” “Onii-chan!!! Welcome back! Oh, there is so much I need to do!” "Calm down Tomomi, just now I’ll be stopping by the High School first, I gotta see some people there.” “Hehe, you mean me, right Onii-chan?” “Yes, you too. And this time, no water balloons, okay?” “Got it! I’ll see you here Onii-chan!” Hanging up his phone and putting it in his pocket, the young man picked up his bag and stood by the curb, waiting for a taxi. “Ow!” The young man was pushed aside by another. “I’m so sorry, here, let me help you up.” “Thanks.” “Now if you excuse me, I have to go,” the other man said, leaving the young man standing there. As the cab pulled up to him, the young man frantically searched through his pockets. “That guy took my wallet!” “Would you like me to call the police, sir?” the cab driver asked. The young man stuck his head in the window and looked at the driver with a serious and stern look on his face. “Nah! It’s alright, guess I’ll just walk!” “Eh?” “Thanks for everything!” he said, waving as he walked away. “What a strange guy.” “Excuse me!” The driver turned to see the exact same flight attendant that the young man interacted with earlier. “What is it, ma’am?” “Did a young man in tattered red clothes come by here earlier?” “You just missed him.” “Damn...You see, I really wanted to talk to him.” “Why?” “You don’t know? He’s a famous archeologist!” “Eh? That guy?” “Yeah, his name is...” ___ After nearly 3 hours of walking to where he wanted to go, the young man arrived at his high school Alma Mater- Yoi Yume Gakuen. “It’s been 2 years since I graduated from here...wonder how things are doing...” As he made his way around the corner, the young man turned to see a bunch of jocks surrounding someone. “Hey, mind telling me what’s going on?” The jocks turned to see the young man and laughed. “Dude, what’s going on with you? You look homeless! Look, here’s 500 yen, go buy yourself a Coke or something, we’re busy,” one of the jocks said, handing him a coin. Patting him on the shoulder, the young man smiled at the jock. “Nah man, let me in on this, I wanna see what kind of guy you’re messing with.” “Sure, as long as you promise to not tell any of the teachers around here.” “Of course, let me get a good look at him.” “Hey Joji, you heard this guy, get up!” Two of the jocks picked up a young teen with long gray hair. Pushing him against the wall, one of the jocks gestured to the young man to walk towards him. Smiling the young man did just that and pet Joji on the head. “Been a while, Joji. Still getting into trouble?” Joji’s eyes widened as the jock next to the young man put his hand on his shoulder. “You know this geek?” “This geek...is one of my friends,” the young man said smiling, before he gripped the jock’s wrist, flipping him over. “Why you!” The two jocks holding up Joji dropped him and charged. The young man just dodged every punch thrown at him, and kicked one of the jocks on the side of his head. “I just hit your temple. You may feel disoriented.” The other jock leapt up as the young man delivered an uppercut straight up into the man’s chin. “You just got punched in the jaw. You may have just bit your tongue,” the young man said smiling. “Ow...run for it!” The three jocks ran for it as the young man helped Joji up. “Thanks Sempai...it’s been like this since you left.” “Joji, what did I tell you? Don’t hold back, you got to be able to stand up for yourself.” “I know Sempai but-” Joji was surprised as a water balloon suddenly smacked the young man in the face. “Hahahaha! Gotcha Onii-chan!” “Tomomi... You little brat!” “Yeep!” The brown haired girl leapt up and put on her goggles. Chewing a piece of bubble gum, she ran up the side of the building and sat on a rooftop. “Phew, he can’t get me up he-” “Guess again.” “Eep!” To her surprise, he was already up there with Joji. “H...Hi, Tomomi-chan.” “Oh, Joji-Sempai! What are you doing with Onii-chan?” “Now Tomomi, you know Joji has been one of our friends for a long time. I just saved him from some jocks.” “Again?! Joji, I told you to tell me if anything was going on,” Tomomi said, taking Joji’s hands into hers. “I...I didn’t want you to worry.” She smiled and gave him a hug. “It’s no problem at all, Joji-Sempai.” With his face turning red, Joji turned to the young man. Pointing to Tomomi and then back to him, the young man formed a heart in his hands. Joji blushed even further and then shook his head frantically. Tomomi looked up at him and blinked. “Joji-Sempai, what’s wrong?” “N...nothing, Tomomi-chan...it’s just that- huh? Where did Sempai go?” “Ack! Onii-chan! Come back!” ___ In the library of Yoi Yume Gakuen sat a girl with long blonde hair with purple streaks. Dressed in gothic lolita attire, she had a small bat-like bow in her hair and an opened parasol. Reading a book, she placed several others onto shelves when Tomomi and Joji ran in. “Yamiko-san!” Putting the book down and jumping from her ladder, the girl closed her parasol and walked towards the two, her unique purple eyes staring at them. “What is it?” “Have you seen Onii-chan? He just came back.” Suddenly, Yamiko’s face turned bright red. “H..he...he’s here?! He’s back?!” “Yeah, Sempai came by earlier but he suddenly disappeared.” “Why didn’t he come to see me?...” Yamiko whispered to herself. “Ahem...I will help you find him. But knowing him, he’s probably with-” ___ A classroom filled with beakers and test tubes were spread across the tables. A young black haired bespectacled man was behind a podium.“And that’s all you need to know. Any questions?” A hand shot up. “Yes, you in the back!” “Sensei, why are you so boring?” The man behind the podium got up and ran to the back. “What was that?!” “Geez, chill Sensei, I’m just telling the truth.” “Put that book down and look me in the e-” “You never change, Hikaru,” the young man said, putting down the book smiling. “And neither do you, Ken Yamata.” “Onii-chan!” “Sempai!” “Yamata-kun!” Tomomi, Joji and Yamiko charged into the classroom, panting. “Oi, what’s up guys?!” “Ken, while I do appreciate you being here, I’m trying to teach a class.” “I get ya, I get ya. But the whole reason I wanted to stop by is to hand you this.” Hikaru was handed a small golden thick hexagon with creases that made a “Y.” “What’s this?” “Just something from my latest expedition. I want you to hang onto it, okay?” Walking over to the others, Ken handed one to Yamiko, then Joji and finally Tomomi. “Keep an eye on these, okay?” “Yes Onii-chan!” “Got it, Sempai!” “Uh...yeah...Yamata-kun.” “Oh, Yamiko!” Ken said, pushing her bangs away from her eyes. “You’re looking good,” he said smiling. Yamiko suddenly fainted in his arms. “Huh. I wonder why she always does that.” “Even if Onii-chan is a genius, he’s still dense.” “Sempai, why don’t you take her into the infirmary?” “Good idea Joji. Tomomi, please no more water balloons.” “Eh?! But I finally got better at aiming!” “Will you guys just leave already?!” “Sorry, ‘Sensei,’” Ken said, sticking his tongue out. Carrying Yamiko to the infirmary, he placed her on a bed and placed the hexagon on a counter near her. ___ “Are you sure about this, Ken?” “Yeah, I trust her. I trust all of them. Just like you trust me.” “Yes, I trust you, but that’s mostly because of what you did for me. But those four that you handed out, they might not be as trusting.” Suddenly, the hexagon on the counter glowed a bright purple. “Wha-” “I told you, I can trust all of them. They have the potential that you seek.” ___ In his classroom, Hikaru was grading newspapers as the hexagon glowed a bright blue. “What is this?” ___ Joji was in his clubroom, drawing and inking a manga. “Almost done!” he said, not noticing the hexagon behind him glowing a bright gray. ___ Tomomi was with her friends when her pocket started to move about. “Huh, who’s calling me right now?” Reaching into her pocket, Tomomi pulled out the hexagon, which glowed a bright pink. “Eh? What Onii-chan gave me?” ___ From the courtyard, an explosion was heard. “What was that?!” “Ken, we have to go! It’s them!” “Damn it...how did they find me here?!” Getting up, Ken felt a tug on his sleeve. “Yamata-kun, what is going on?” Ken looked distraught as he shook Yamiko off. “Take that thing I gave you and follow me. You’ll know what’s going on.” Yamiko looked at him and reluctantly did what she was told. Following the explosion, Joji, Tomomi and Hikaru arrived to see Ken and Yamiko appear. “Ken! What’s going on?!” “Hikaru, take Joji, Tomomi and Yamiko and take cover!” “Yamata-kun, what are you talking abo-” Ken suddenly lifted Yamiko up and tossed her. Hikaru and Joji caught her, and together the four ran behind a building. “What about Yamata-kun?” “You know he’s always been someone we can trust. So I don’t see why we can’t this time.” “Whatever is going on, Sempai must know.” “Be safe, Onii-chan.” “You’re right...Yamata-kun, be careful.” Ken stood in the courtyard as several shadow like monsters came out from every crease and corner around. “So, some Terrors come out to play, huh?” Ken held his hand out, and to the surprise of his friends, a handle materialized in his hands. “What will that do?” a Terror asked as it slowly approached him. “Just watch.” Swinging the handle around, a blade sprouted as he cut the Terror in half. “Wha-” “I’m just getting warmed up,” Ken said, kicking the upper half of the Terror into another one. Grabbing the lower half by the ankle, Ken swung it into another Terror. “Is this thing real?” Joji asked. “I...I’m not sure...I mean, all the things Ken has done is relatively impossible.” “Onii-chan is amazing! Right, Yamiko-san?” “Uh...yeah...” Ken took up his sword and swung it around again, cutting more Terrors as they attempted to surround him. Ken cut through a crowd of them to see some converging into each other. In place of the bundle of Terrors was a larger, more horrifying creature, with multiple red eyes and tusks. “A Horror, huh? Guess it’s time for you to come out,” Ken said, holding up a hexagon just like the ones he gave the others. “What’s he doing now?” “Come out, Drake!” The hexagon opened up, revealing a dragon sculpted in its folds. The eyes of the dragon lit up, as a real dragon emerged from it, attacking the Horror. Biting its neck, the dragon spun around grabbed the Horror’s tusks, pushing them downward and snapping them off. As the Horror screamed in pain, the dragon flew up and opened its mouth. Suddenly, the air around became tight as a massive fireball formed. Launching the fireball towards the Horror, the attack exploded upon impact as the Dragon flew back into the hexagon. “That takes care of that.” “Oi, Ken! What just happened?!” Hikaru asked, walking towards him. Ken turned when his eyes widened. “Look out!” he shouted, pushing Hikaru over as a Terror sliced down onto Ken’s arm. “Argh...” “Sempai!” “Onii-chan!” “Yamata-kun!” “Take this!” Ken said, punching right through the Terror. “So my subordinates aren’t good enough to take you down, huh?” Ken turned around to see the same jock he had fought with earlier. “So, even one of them is here, huh?” “That’s the guy that picked on me earlier! But...something is wrong with him...” The group watched as the jock’s body contorted in an inhuman manner. Looking upward, an opening shown up from his head as a hand came out. “What the hell?!” The group watched on as a full creature came out, brandishing a blade. “Let me guess, you were formed out of a nightmare of him being surrounded by blades.” “Very observant. I am the Cutter Nightmare. And you have something my master wants.” “It’d be this, right?” Ken asked, holding up his hexagon. “Give it to me!” “Sorry, but no. Not gonna.” “Hehehe...guess I gotta use force on ya, huh?” “Bring it. Your host couldn’t do anything to me, so I doubt you can too.” Swinging his sword, the Cutter Nightmare clashed blades with Ken. “You sound pretty confident. I like that!” As the two engaged in a swordfight, Hikaru and the others attempted to step away. “This can’t be happening...” “Sempai...what happened to you while you were gone?” “Onii-chan, fight on!” “Yamata-kun, be sa-” Before she could finish her sentence, Yamiko tripped and fell, dropping her hexagon onto the ground. “I see that you had more...” the Cutter Nightmare said, smiling. Leaping towards Yamiko, the Cutter Nightmare swung downwards at her. “KYAA!!!” Yamiko screamed, closing her eyes. ___ “Hey, your opponent is me.” Yamiko opened her eyes to see Ken blocking the blade with his own. “Yamata-kun!” “Tch...I want that MythoTome!” the Cutter Nightmare said reaching for the hexagon. “Sorry, but not today,” Ken said, punching the Cutter Nightmare upward. “Okay guys, now it’s time for you to find out what I gave you those things in the first place.” Ken stepped forward and held his MythoTome in the air, when a golden belt formed on his waist. “Mythology, Yume Hatsudo!” Plugging the MythoTome onto his belt, it opened up revealing the dragon. The belt announced: DRAGON! MYTHOOO-RED! From the belt, Drake came out and surrounded Ken before flying into his back- boots formed from his feet, gauntlets formed from his arms, a helmet formed from his head as his wings collapsed onto Ken’s hips, forming a long cloak. His legs, arms and chest became black as a number 1 appeared on his chest. “Arashi no yume da! Aka no Ryu! MythoRed!” “What the?! Ken, what are you-” “Now’s not the time Hikaru, I’ll explain later.” Raising his blade, the others were jumped back as it ignited. “Terrors!” the Cutter Phantom shouted as they came out. “Get him!” “Don’t think so. MYTHOSPELL- SWARM!” Ken stood in place as he multiplied, brandishing his blade. Each copy ran towards a Terror and cut away, before converging back into a single person. “Go Onii-chan, go!” Tomomi shouted, raising her arms up. “Sempai is amazing!” “So this is what you’ve been doing this whole time, Ken?” “Yeah. And if you don’t mind, I’ll end this quickly.” Raising his MythoTome, Ken aimed it at the Cutter Nightmare. “MYTHOSPELL, DRAGON’S INFERNO SLASH!” The MythoTome formed a shape around the Cutter Nightmare as Ken swung his blade forward. The Cutter Nightmare raised his own blade and blocked the cut, but could feel himself being pushed back. “Ugh...I swear...the Nightmare will destroy this world, and all the dreams within it!” “Well good luck with that buddy. I’m a Dreamer!” Appearing behind the Cutter Nightmare, the monster collapsed and exploded as Ken’s sword retracted. Transforming back into a human, Ken looked at his friends and smiled. “Time to tell them the truth, Ken,” said Drake, who was suddenly a small younger looking dragon who sat on Ken’s shoulder. “Yeah, I’ll let you know exactly what happened while I was away." Story 1: I’m a Dreamer! End Next Time On Yume Sentai Mythonger! Ken: These are what I found ???: So our first attack failed, huh? ???: Bring me that MythoTome! Yamiko: Mythology, Yume Hatsudo! Story 2: Violet Darkness!
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Super Sentai Creator
Join Date: Jun 2013
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VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dude how do u make ur words red, blue, or yellow{and more}. I am making my first episode of my sentai and I like to know how to do that but very good episode 1
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「蝙蝠騎士の魔界<ブラム>」
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: The Catacombs of Ohio
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That was very nice. My only complaint that some of the dialogue seemed a bit, odd. It just seems a bit weird at times with how certain words and phrases are put together. It's not that it's bad, but it could use a bit of work.
Other then that, everything else was very good.
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fencer of gold
Join Date: Dec 2012
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MORE!!!!!!
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